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by Anonymous

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by GuiltyPleasure05/26/11

Another.....

....read-able work! My lucky day! Could salvation be at hand?

Tess + 5

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by twelveoone05/27/11

A5

Damn cans, broken bottles glisten in the sun, returning home so to speak

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by ishtat05/27/11

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One of your best for a while SN, enjoyed it.

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by bulltlr06/01/11

5

Great read my favorite lines....

spirit and joints aching
though I'm not yet old

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