by ChynaMarie
I hate how short your chapters are!!! I really love all your stories and cannot wait to read more. Please post the next chapter soon.
But your chapters are truely too Short.
Good Story.
my chapters are short...but i'll try and fix it...Promise!
the woman that wrote about a chick with a pink riding crop making a promise? Is it me or should we be worried now? lol kidding great chapter more please.
@hisangelbeauty hahahahaha...that is too funny....and sorry guys i know there are a lot of editing mistakes....I'M SORRY...blame my non-focus on end of the year exams
I am screaming in my head. Why did you leave us like this. You are truly evil lady. Please ace your exams so you can get back to writing.
this is really good i cant wait for you to continue the story it has alot of potential so please post soon
I just submitted Please Cowboy? Ch.03 or i am now after i edit it...sooo look outtttttttttttttttttttt
your story and writing sucks and not in a good way. It's so cookie cutter and I wonder because this looks a lot like the rancher's ultimatium
my stories are original!!!!!! So you stfu!! Thank you! Oh and thanks for reading!!!
oh gosh i know i am commenting on the wrong chapter but i read the whole thing i love hot possessive men
this story is nothing like "The Rancher's Ultimatum." I have that book and its not that great, if at all, IMHO. I'd be offended if anyone said my work was like it in any sense of the word.
Go Lily w/her pink riding crop LOL Pink is my fave color. I find the fact that she's using something that would normally, in appearance because of its color, seem so 'feminine and dainty' as a tool for punishment quite sexy. Hope Scott enjoys the pleasure as much as I'm enjoying reading it.