All Comments on 'Please Cowboy? Ch. 02'

by ChynaMarie

Sort by:
  • 13 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Sigh...

I hate how short your chapters are!!! I really love all your stories and cannot wait to read more. Please post the next chapter soon.

C_frommnC_frommnalmost 13 years ago
Hate to Agree with Anonymous

But your chapters are truely too Short.

Good Story.

ChynaMarieChynaMariealmost 13 years agoAuthor
Yeah i know

my chapters are short...but i'll try and fix it...Promise!

hisangelbeautyhisangelbeautyalmost 13 years ago
hmmm

the woman that wrote about a chick with a pink riding crop making a promise? Is it me or should we be worried now? lol kidding great chapter more please.

ChynaMarieChynaMariealmost 13 years agoAuthor

@hisangelbeauty hahahahaha...that is too funny....and sorry guys i know there are a lot of editing mistakes....I'M SORRY...blame my non-focus on end of the year exams

love4811love4811almost 13 years ago
Are you serious

I am screaming in my head. Why did you leave us like this. You are truly evil lady. Please ace your exams so you can get back to writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
i hope for more

this is really good i cant wait for you to continue the story it has alot of potential so please post soon

ChynaMarieChynaMariealmost 13 years agoAuthor
So everyone!!!!!

I just submitted Please Cowboy? Ch.03 or i am now after i edit it...sooo look outtttttttttttttttttttt

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
sucks

your story and writing sucks and not in a good way. It's so cookie cutter and I wonder because this looks a lot like the rancher's ultimatium

ChynaMarieChynaMariealmost 13 years agoAuthor
Oh wow!!!

my stories are original!!!!!! So you stfu!! Thank you! Oh and thanks for reading!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
i loved it

oh gosh i know i am commenting on the wrong chapter but i read the whole thing i love hot possessive men

got2luvmelgot2luvmelover 12 years ago
Anon

this story is nothing like "The Rancher's Ultimatum." I have that book and its not that great, if at all, IMHO. I'd be offended if anyone said my work was like it in any sense of the word.

Go Lily w/her pink riding crop LOL Pink is my fave color. I find the fact that she's using something that would normally, in appearance because of its color, seem so 'feminine and dainty' as a tool for punishment quite sexy. Hope Scott enjoys the pleasure as much as I'm enjoying reading it.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous