You get off on this shit? I just puked up thinking about this story. You have a really fucked up non-man friend but you are a matching pair of freaks next time make sure your non-man friend takes the money. You are a bitch/whore and he should get something out of it apart from a nasty rash that hopefully will turn into some really nasty.
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Anonymous05/25/11
Let me know the site ...
Good read ... had to look up "Pimms" ... Once again, Fuck the trolls ... let them climb back under their bridge! ;-)
Nice story. Nice photo on your profile. Beads reminds me of the candy necklaces and bracelets that were available when I was a kid. Would love to eat your top and feast on your tits.
awesome first story. love how the guys just kept cumming for more.
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A good story that more than lives up to the title. Having over twenty people in a gang-bang is ambitious, and the story wobbled a couple of times, but on the whole worked well.I didn't buy the 12" monster cock. I think you need to make that a nine or ten inch at the very most for the sake of credibility.
Recommended.
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Anonymous05/27/11
super hot
Really incredible. 20 men at one time is a lot. The story flowed pretty good. it had pretty much everything. Except anal.
You kept a good pace and the narrative flowed well. I would love to have been one of the twenty.
If I have any complaints, it's that you kept switching from past tense to present tense for a sentence or two, then back again. It was a little distracting.
Don't sweat the drive-by anonymous comments, I don't ever recall seeing any stories here written by "Anonymous". They sure seem to read a lot of free stories in categories that they don't like, only to complain about the subject matter.
Nice first story! Hope that you post more, soon! love the candy bra (profile picture). keep up the erotic work :)
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Anonymous06/18/15
Good start. Bad finish.
Started hot then nothing. All you write about is Chris. What happened to/with the other twenty guys? This could have been several pages long but it ended up as a short story. A very short story. There was no gangbang at all. What a farce.
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You get off on this shit? I just puked up thinking about this story. You have a really fucked up non-man friend but you are a matching pair of freaks next time make sure your non-man friend takes the money. You are a bitch/whore and he should get something out of it apart from a nasty rash that hopefully will turn into some really nasty.
Let me know the site ...
Good read ... had to look up "Pimms" ... Once again, Fuck the trolls ... let them climb back under their bridge! ;-)
Nice Story and Nice Photo
Nice story. Nice photo on your profile. Beads reminds me of the candy necklaces and bracelets that were available when I was a kid. Would love to eat your top and feast on your tits.
WOW
That was hot! Don't you just love good ole anonymous... Hell if he doesn't like this kind of story, why read it!
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awesome first story. love how the guys just kept cumming for more.
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A good story that more than lives up to the title. Having over twenty people in a gang-bang is ambitious, and the story wobbled a couple of times, but on the whole worked well.I didn't buy the 12" monster cock. I think you need to make that a nine or ten inch at the very most for the sake of credibility.
Recommended.
super hot
Really incredible. 20 men at one time is a lot. The story flowed pretty good. it had pretty much everything. Except anal.
Loved the story
You kept a good pace and the narrative flowed well. I would love to have been one of the twenty.
If I have any complaints, it's that you kept switching from past tense to present tense for a sentence or two, then back again. It was a little distracting.
Don't sweat the drive-by anonymous comments, I don't ever recall seeing any stories here written by "Anonymous". They sure seem to read a lot of free stories in categories that they don't like, only to complain about the subject matter.
great first story - hope to see more
Nice first story! Hope that you post more, soon! love the candy bra (profile picture). keep up the erotic work :)
Good start. Bad finish.
Started hot then nothing. All you write about is Chris. What happened to/with the other twenty guys? This could have been several pages long but it ended up as a short story. A very short story. There was no gangbang at all. What a farce.
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