by littlegirlnaughty
i like the pace of the story and i wish that i had a neighbor like that in my neighborhood.
wonderful , he would be a great neighbor i wonder how long before my husband figured it out could not have himthat close lol
but i wish
Using words like "slut" only takes away from an otherwise perfect and extremely hot story. Keep it up, minus the sexist words that are more of a turn off than anything!
It was a good story but it went just a little too quick for me. In the excitement of writing it, I'd probably get into a hurry too. LOL! As I read it, I could see the action in my head.