All Comments on 'Becoming Myself Ch. 03'

Its way too short....and whats with this Michael? Cant wait to read more.love it

OMG.... this is an awesome story with good solid characters. I am only disappointed that Marv couldn't just walk into Jarred's embrace. But I guess nothing is ever that easy. Nice job

wasnt expecting that...cant wait to read more

I so did NOT see that coming LOL! Good god, this little twist just turned things up a notch!

ok, need to get poor Marv a friend. QUICK!!

you know that does make sense lol but now i'm REALLY curious to find out how this pans out.

Hope there's another chapter soon.

Happy Writing!

Clearly they are going to be together in the end, but... this is a major monkey wrench!

Oh, please tell me your alive! Haha, I really enjoyed this, and I can't wait for an update soon. Cliffhangers hurt. :(

OMG !!!!!!!!!!!!!! You Need To Update . I've Been Dying Here , Your An Awesome Writer :)

Please write the fourth (final?) installment! I'm dying here!

That was mean to leave us hanging like that!!!! I'm loving it and can't wait to read the next chapter so hurry. PLEASE

You can't let it go on a cliffhanger like that and then not follow up ASAP!

That was the exact word that came out of my mouth on the last line. We're all ready for the next installment, and hanging on every word. I absolutely love your writing, and can't wait to read the amazing conclusion that's dying to be posted. Also, have you considered continuing "Unrequited Love"? I know it just turned 4 years old, but that story mirrored my life so well, and created such a deep impression that being only six pages doesn't due justice to the masterpiece you created.

This story is waaaay slower than a slow burn....BECAUSE YOU'RE NOT POSTING THE NEXT INSTALLMENT! Please, please, please, please continue your story! PLEASE!

Title says it all. 6 months? Really? Love your writing but COME ON!!!!

This story is wonderful! Will you be posting the next chapter soon? I'm quite addicted and would love to read more!

Don't give up on your talent to write!! :)

OMG.....PLEASE CONTINUE THIS....SOOOO CRUEL LOL

Hope so, it could be finished in just one chapter.

...please? I have suffered memory loss since an accident on a bicycle, so I really can relate to this story! I would love to see where the storyline leads!

That was one of the cruelest cliff hangers ever and it's been so long.

PLEASE finish. PLEASE. Merci :)

Oh you GOT to be kidding me...noooo PLEASE don't leave it like this! :(

It truly is a GREAT story!!

I really wish you would finish this story, you just can't leave it like this :( pretty please with a cherry on top

Totally didn't see that coming!!! lol Any plans to continue with this story?

Great story. What a cliff hanger

its nt fair. Where's the rest?

I am so God damm tired of reading incomplete stories, if writers cannot finish a story Do Not Start, Do Not Post better yet stay quiet.

Hi,

Great so far, please don't leave us hanging, please

Totally agree with @brijeon whats the point of posting incomplete stories if your not gonna finish them, Had this author as a favorite and has yet to ever finish the story its just sad

This has a great foundation and could be one of the best series on literotica but you need to finish it!!! Come on you can't leave us hanging like this.

I can't wait to read more!

I just wanted to say that I love your stories. I have read and loved them, even falling in love with your characters. Chris and Dereck from "Unrequited Love" are two great guys, and I believe you could write a sequel to that story. I'd like to see Chris with a bit of blond chest hair to add to his Greek God features. Some chest hair on a young man can be a very sexy sight, and even more appealing to taste and touch. I also like Brad's hairy body from "Gentle Giant." I imagine David's delight when he finally sees Brad's hairy chest. Keep up the good writing!

This is a great story. Please continue.

Maybe I’m way off base here, but I was getting the impression that it might turn out that Jared is actually Marvyn’s Brother! Why would Marvyn kick someone out of his life, that he was always ‘close friends’ with, just because he found out that he was gay. The only thing that contradicts this theory is when Marvyn’s wife asks him if he is ‘in love with Jared’, so my theory could be wrong.

There is the possibility that they were business partners when Jared ‘came out’ as gay to Marvyn, however. But if Marvyn separated Jared from his life after that revelation, when exactly had Marvyn and Jared been lovers in the past?

Something is not making sense with this story.

Hey, you probably never check this, but IF you do, just know that there are still people who read and love this! If you ever decide to continue this story, I'm here! :) If it stays unfinished, in my head I'm going to imagine that Marvin comes to terms with his sexuality and lives a happy life, friends with Jarred but not partners.

I think Jarred probably loved Marv for a long time, still does in a way, but has found a new love. Marv and Jarrod talk, work through their issues, stay close, and Marv can finally learn to be himself. I'm sure the two would've been great together, but happiness comes in many forms, and I hope that Jarred was able to find that with Michael. Sometimes, when we deny ourselves, we might miss chances. New ones will always come, though. (So that's my in-my-head ending)

I am so sad this never continued. What a great story.

I did not like the ending, another blow to his already fragile staters . Jarred should have told Marc about his partner before he even made the invitation