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Around here some bars serve tap beer in a four-ounce glass so it is finished before it warms up! Any smaller and it is warm before it reaches the bar....
Welcome back!
I'm glad you're back. I've been enjoying this story and have missed you. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
Keep it coming
Please we've got to make it at least through the wedding. And take as much time as you need. Use as many chapters as you need. They can be short or long. It's your story after all. Thank you for sharing it with us.
CONSTRUCTIVE REMARKS
TO RPS, WHAT HAPPENED? THIS STORY STARTED OFF ON GREAT EXPECTATIONS. NOW IT IS BECOMING A SHAGGY DOG. MAYBE ITS BECAUSE OF THE 1 & 2 PAGE SUBMISSIONS. THIS STORY STILL HAS GOOD CHARACTERS. THE STORY LINE AND PLOTS ARE NOT THERE AT THIS TIME AND THE LAST 2-3 CHAPTERS. KEEP WRITING. TK U MLJ LV NV
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