by romaerotica
You are an awesome writer . . . I can't wait for you to continue the story! Your descriptions are dead on . . . this is the best sex story I have read here!
It took to long to get into the story that posed such promise and suspense then just ended, iterally fizzled.
Loved this story and long to be the lucky girl! its rare to find a story so well written. I was a little disappointed with the ending as i was hoping that she would get what she craved the most...cant wait to see more! Thankyou x
You have an incredible amount of writing talent - I see myself so much in the women you write about. I just wish you'd continue each story to an end point, because much like you leave your characters, you leave the reader panting and unsatisfied.
possessing my mind.filling my soul with shameful cravings.i am left hanging,awaiting your words.my blood thuds thickly in my aching body,my clit is swollen,throbbing and gushing her juice.all for you.and i silently sob,deep inside,in that empty place.yearning for you to release me.but you only tease.forcing me to wait,again.so i wait,like the needy woman i am,lusting after the dark images your words create.please,will you write more? many blessings,gem.
Yeah seriously that's just evil though. Now I'm just bloody panting for more... and the funny thing is I'm eighteen and happen to be a fucktoy of an older man myself... bliss. You got it just right. More!
please finish this, i need him to fuck her so i can make my pussy cum.
This a very nice mindfuck,. I get denied another another chapter just like Lily gets denied having her pussy smashed. Poetic.
Jax
That was hot - but you left as hanging at a crucial point!
Seriously? I don't see how you couldn't like that. . . I'm so wet right now, I need the next chapter. . .