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Getting There Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/29/11

more!

Dying to know where this goes! Pls update soon! Great start!

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by Anonymous05/29/11

Echoing that plea for more!

Loved this first chapter, and I will be on tenterhooks waiting for the following ones. You've hooked me with this well-written first start.

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by LoneStarRider05/29/11

Well....

Other than it being a hideous to end such a short chapter, it looks as if it might (maybe, possibly) be the beginning to a good story. A little more backdrop on the Gemma/Ryan relationship might be of value.

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by iamsuz06/03/11

Good start

to the story, I'll look forward to reading more.

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