All Comments on 'Serving Lady Olivia'

Really enjoyed it, a nice idea. Would like to have a follow-on chapter with them exploring some of the D/S on their own time.

Minor nit: there were some continuity problems (sometimes it seemed like their hands were bound but the next sentence had them doing things with their unbound hands).

Thoroughly enjoyed, a really good read with great characters, and plenty of play. More please!

I would rather read well written vanilla than coarse and crude BDSM but oh what a pleasure it is to find both in a single story. Well written and arousing without the crudity of language construction that is so common. Thank you.

You lost me at the drugged tea and total lack of consent

I think you could do a lot with these three. The girls return to Olivia. The girls explore D/s on their own as another reader pointed out. So much you could do from here.

5/5

J