You're such a romantic and here that sentiment is, in all its glory. A wonderful story and maybe a little of the "absence makes the heart grow fonder?" It's great, you know I love it and I can't wait to see what else you write. Liiiike... maybe another hockey story? I won't name names... cough, cough... B... Sorry, almost slipped. ;-)
Kind - They do things they know will please the other.
Peaceful - Tense, yes; needy, yes but peaceful because the obstacles have been overcome and this is the denouement.
I can almost see the film of the story playing out, surrounded in a shimmering gold cloud of dust-motes and sunbeams. It is a wonderfully "de-stressing" story - thank you for sharing it!
I'll say it again; this is a highly-crafted story. Living with someone who travels a lot isn't always easy. This is a reunion worth waiting for. Thank you.
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Anonymous05/29/11
Bland, over sentimental and whilst technically sound is below your usual standard.
I haven't marked it because while clearly better than most other stories on this site, your standards have led us to expect better
I really enjoyed it. There's that hint that there's a bigger story that you aren't telling us; maybe you'll expand it some day. But as it is, I love it. Of course, I'm a sucker. :-P. Keep em coming!
What a great way interpretation a great song. I think the boys would be honored, especially with the thought of honoring the "ring" and all it holds near on the road away from home.
If I ever get to meet up with Master again, this is what I want. Loving tender hungry sex. It's a perfect story, thanks for writing it.
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Anonymous07/16/11
this is good literotica
even without a lengthy storyline, it still conveys a lot of emotion and the sex wasn't skimped on...these kinds of writing is what elevates this site from just being a literary porn site
Another first read and it is impressive how you got so much love and tenderness into a brief snippet of a story. He has obviously been gone, but doing what is not clear, not that it matters, because she is OK with it. There is the matter of her scar and his anger at how she got it, an auto accident, an operation, an assault, there is an entire multi chapter story contained in that brief line just waiting to be put to life by you as the author.
One of the things I really like about your stories is that you stay away from excessive and repetitive sex. There is a current (12/2011) story series now running by Calibeachgirl (?) and I lose interest because the sex scenes are just too over the top. You use sex between lovers/couples as an affirmation of their attraction, or their love for each other, not as the central theme of the story and of course that is how love as compared to lust really is.
The worst part of reading your stories is that I feel there is something I missed out of life as my relationships never seemed to be as intense and passionate, but maybe it is just because time dulls our memories?
English
your stories are always good
But in this case i would say your story was excellent very enjoyable as always looking forward to your next gift to us thank you much
Another great story
Always good to read a story by you. I know it will be a good read.
With respect
DG
Simply Delightful
I am always thrilled when I see a new story you’ve submitted. Each one has been a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing your gift with us.
Short and definitely sweet.
You're such a romantic and here that sentiment is, in all its glory. A wonderful story and maybe a little of the "absence makes the heart grow fonder?" It's great, you know I love it and I can't wait to see what else you write. Liiiike... maybe another hockey story? I won't name names... cough, cough... B... Sorry, almost slipped. ;-)
Can a reviewer use these words?
Sweet - Very tender and loving between the two.
Kind - They do things they know will please the other.
Peaceful - Tense, yes; needy, yes but peaceful because the obstacles have been overcome and this is the denouement.
I can almost see the film of the story playing out, surrounded in a shimmering gold cloud of dust-motes and sunbeams. It is a wonderfully "de-stressing" story - thank you for sharing it!
SA Penn Lady
Beautiful, erotic, romantic, beautifully written--in short, thoroughly SA Penn Lady.
A cut above
Very touching piece the type of story I equate with the word "Erotica" sexy but with depth and tenderness.
I've said it before,
I'll say it again; this is a highly-crafted story. Living with someone who travels a lot isn't always easy. This is a reunion worth waiting for. Thank you.
Bland, over sentimental and whilst technically sound is below your usual standard.
I haven't marked it because while clearly better than most other stories on this site, your standards have led us to expect better
I have to listen to the song now!
I really enjoyed it. There's that hint that there's a bigger story that you aren't telling us; maybe you'll expand it some day. But as it is, I love it. Of course, I'm a sucker. :-P. Keep em coming!
Great Tribute
What a great way interpretation a great song. I think the boys would be honored, especially with the thought of honoring the "ring" and all it holds near on the road away from home.
Short... and Good!
A good read. Almost fits in the romance category.
btw... I've always liked BadCompany's music.
Wondering how I missed this.......
Absolutely breathtaking as always.....
FIRST TIME READING YOUR WORK
BEAUTIFUL STORY! This was the first time I'd read your work and already I am hooked.
If I ever get to meet up with Master again, this is what I want. Loving tender hungry sex. It's a perfect story, thanks for writing it.
this is good literotica
even without a lengthy storyline, it still conveys a lot of emotion and the sex wasn't skimped on...these kinds of writing is what elevates this site from just being a literary porn site
Excellent
Another first read and it is impressive how you got so much love and tenderness into a brief snippet of a story. He has obviously been gone, but doing what is not clear, not that it matters, because she is OK with it. There is the matter of her scar and his anger at how she got it, an auto accident, an operation, an assault, there is an entire multi chapter story contained in that brief line just waiting to be put to life by you as the author.
One of the things I really like about your stories is that you stay away from excessive and repetitive sex. There is a current (12/2011) story series now running by Calibeachgirl (?) and I lose interest because the sex scenes are just too over the top. You use sex between lovers/couples as an affirmation of their attraction, or their love for each other, not as the central theme of the story and of course that is how love as compared to lust really is.
The worst part of reading your stories is that I feel there is something I missed out of life as my relationships never seemed to be as intense and passionate, but maybe it is just because time dulls our memories?
Please keep writing, you do it so well.
Morning Sun
Wonderful story, sweet, fresh and VERY exciting.
SHORT AND SWEET
nothing beats being home in your own bed with the one you love....nice little tale
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