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The Way It Should Have Been

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by sethp05/30/11

well written but

It was well written but...way too short and the beginning part about the catheter sort of turned me off before I even got started. Keep writing and posting though, you have talent.

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by estragon06/01/11

I Understand People Being Turned Off

by catheters. I certainly was, both times I had it done to me. It is a particularly disgusting process (and I'm told for women it's worse, if that's possible). Nevertheless, I wrote the scene as real as memory could make it.

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