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...arguing with her ego more.Always a good read anyway...

Loved it. I hope you come out with a 2nd chapter. You will need back stoty though. Maybe having the male character come to claim her? Get caught? Be the one who set her up? Anyway just ideas from a reader awaiting what you'll write next.

Of your stuff before, and it's often pretty good and without the hate other writers have.

This story would have been better if he did in fact rescue her, but then he finds her to be an obedient fuck slut, so he decides just to keep her for his own playmate instead of trying to really deprogram her. Or even better if it turns out he paid for her programming and the letter is her final act of will which ends with him claiming her.

and has his own personal fucktoy. I like it. That'll teach her to cheat.

Thanks , good story , I enjoyed it.

I love your epistolary works, and this one is no exception. Reading Justine battle her mind and body (and losing) was a wonderful experience..."I kept getting hornier and sluttier ohsh it i shuouldnt haveuse d that wordd" sent me over the edge, but I kept on reading...you definitely have a captivating writing style. Keep it up please!

I love imagining a different world--where females are in the position of power that males are in now! But I don't want to be as cruel as males have been and so many are still.

This also makes me think about whether if some females (inclusive) are more--or only?--excited by male dominant fantasies they should give them up for ethical/political reasons--and give up erotic feelings--short-term--hopefully--thinking the bad feelings from these fantasies are not worth any erotic pleasure?

But reality to me is people simply do change. What you imagined as a teenager, for example, when the only access you had to erotic material was showing females degraded, raped, impregnated, even murdered (all real life for females all over the world--knowing what's happening to girls and women all over the world affects every female who has this information)--what you could tolerate then isn't what you can tolerate now. Then I thought this was just the way it was--I didn't know it didn't have to be that way--I'm talking about reading and imagination here, not real life. I didn't know that sex didn't have to be the misogynistic stuff that I read by famous literary males.

I love this video below about a world where women are the ones in power! And men see what we've had to live through--and worse--and still are living through--

http://www.theguardian.com/lifeandstyle/womens-blog/2014/feb/11/oppressed-majority-film-women-eleonore-pourriat

I'm not sure about films--I'm not as much into them as far as erotic stuff goes--

where women do oral stuff to men--not that they're subserviant--I just like--maybe I do like visual stuff better in this particular instance--when they're not being abused in any way--watching them do whatever it is that they do--

it's just very sexy--and pretty--

even if I didn't want to do this myself--there's a lot of erotic stuff that's pretty and/or sexy that you wouldn't want to actually do (or might or do) that's still just--almost or is beautiful to look at--everything doesn't have to be reality--

like "tentacle porn"--it can be beautiful art and seductive, but no one would want to actually DO this--

I like watching the models at http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MoMv1njA1GA

suck on lollypops--even if there were no men in the world--I'd still love this (this video is not best in quality)--I like watching pretty, adorable, sexy women suck lollies--

and I'm a girl--

and I look at fashion mags--which is all eye/mouth porn--

I think it's just puritans who try to degrade something pretty and natural and say you can't think this is funny, cute--because don't you know it's really this gross thing we're showing you so that you'll see the light? What you find delightful and charming is really ugly! We are the thought police! You think it's pretty, but we say it's ugly!

Now: Do you get it?

No. I still think it's pretty, adorable, and sweet.

so fuckoff

we approve--

"Jesus Christ."

That cheapens the entire film. Is it really trying to make Christianity legit?

The film's so beautiful, that that's hard to believe, but--

why bring all this Christian symbolism into it?????????????????????????????

Do they think they can suck in more viewers this way?

DO CHURCHES--CLAIMING TO BE LIBERAL--SHOW THIS FILM AT "POT LUCKS"?

It's still a good movie and a very good use of myth--

the pregnant girl, the barn, the straw, the cows and their lowing--

TishaKovey

Christianity sucked up the best and most beautiful of all myth--

they were shameless--

like Nazis stealing the world's art--

I couldn't sit next to you because I was afraid I'd tremble and you'd see.

(This is a pome.)

admit it.

You'd look at me and say, "You're stoned!"

So what? I wasn't going to a job interview--

And what you called stoned, most people wouldn't have. But you did make me feel paranoid and ashamed. You never got stoned.

You said I was allowed to drink. That was ok. Healthy.

But pot smoking made people spacy, etc.

you wouldn't have wanted even medical pot to be legal

or for fey people to be married (though why they'd want to is anyone's guess)

Dunno--draino?

Brains down the drain?

I'M GOING TO GIT SUM POT IF IT'S THE LAST THING I EVER DO--

I'M TIRED OF THIS TYRANNY--

great dunno then you'll turn into a pothead as well as an alcoholic--

sowhatfucyu--SO WAS BUKOWSKI

WELL HE WAS A GUY NOW WUDDNT HE?

THERE JEAN RHYS, FUCK FACE--

Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh?

its for potheads

which is what youll be IF YOU EVER SMOKE POT AGAIN

o g wel fuc me fas

DONT WORRY DIDKHED I DONT HAVE ANY

(ah pretening)

" ... data shows that sleeping 5 hours per night (as I’ve done for the last 18 months) is slightly *safer* than sleeping 8 hours per night, at least if you define safe as “not dying.”

http://www.bulletproofexec.com/sleep-hacking-1-million-people-prove-sleeping-5-hours-is-healther-than-sleeping-8-hours

"Reading Justine battle her mind and body (and losing) ... "

Just curious.

I'm too

" ... the letter is her final act of will which ends with him claiming her."

I didn't know he was going to claim her.

Otherwise, I would've submitted.