Keep on writing and keep on proof reading! Its always those last paragraphs that are HARDest to find the problems with. Probably has something to do with lack of blood in the brain at the time.
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Anonymous05/30/11
Wimpy cuck gives wife to "friend"
Wife ditches cuck to be with "friend", cuck is an loser.
This is my kind of story. It's discrete while being on the wild side. It's so realistic that I felt like I was right there. Thanks
by
Anonymous05/30/11
Liked it
I like how realistic and believable it was. And it wasn't a slut wife, behind the back cheating story. It was hot, sexy and this is the type of wife I'd love to have!
by
Anonymous05/30/11
Not a bad story ...
BUT ... as has been said, it needs editing. Look at it yourself when you finish writing ... then submit it for proofing by one of the authors on this site so they can pick away at it and make corrections.
Pay no attention to the "Bibile-Thumpers" as they love the stories in "Loving Wives", but hate themselves for reading them afterwards.
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Anonymous05/30/11
"I like how realistic and believable it was. And it wasn't a slut wife, behind the back cheating story. It was hot, sexy and this is the type of wife I'd love to have!"
This is the type of woman you would want to have as your wife? someone that needs to fuck someone else to get off while you watch? well I guess some men don't satisfy their women and some women don't satisfy thier husbands. Go and talk to your wife and see how many people she can fuck and how many creampies you are going to eat.
This story had emotions and feelings. It was believeable and an enjoyable read from begining to end.I look forward to reading much more from you. Please keep up the great work.
Very believable and hot story. Thanks for sharing.
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Anonymous07/20/11
LOVE the story! Can't wait to read more!
by
Anonymous08/05/11
OMG!
Ive allways wanted exactly this to happen
Between my wife and i, this story ive dreamed about
countless times! I could not beleave what I was reading
was my biggest fantasy and could not hold back and unwillingly
shot my load in my pants whitout even touching myself!
What a hell of an orgasm this was! Now I have a stain on my pants!
IM AT WORK! LOL!
I agree with the previous two comments. I think it is a great story, very well told AND it has a nice positive ending for the husband and wife (something many of the other stories do not). Kudos to you!!
by
Anonymous09/05/12
done with a fucking whore and her cuckold
you guys are fucking stupid....she a whore you dickless morons
by
Anonymous09/12/12
Sounds like a good time for all, well done
Done this once and have never been so excited before or since.
by
Anonymous10/17/12
thats what i want
That's what I want to happen in our marriage. I'd love for my wife to fuck a friend . Iv been working on it .
by
Anonymous11/29/12
negative feed back
Whats with the negative feed back. I thought it was a great story. The people that leave negative feed back and call women whores ------- Move on if you do not like these type of stories. Maybe be you should read men on men stories. That is why stories are in differant sections, move on. Keep the stories cuumming love it.
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Anonymous11/29/12
it is a story
and people can comment on a fucking story so knock off being the god damn pc police. everyone comments on stories, all stories, for as long as people have been writing them.
"I wished I could help Greg by allowing him to fuck my wife"
Greater love hath no man for a friend than to put his wife down to be laid...
Incidentally, this story is riddled with missing words. I suggest re-reading submissions before posting.
by
Anonymous05/09/13
horny wife
i know how greg feel my wife also fuck my friend and after that our sex was great
by
Anonymous07/26/13
@Erotronaut
No need to dispair. Your wife is getting all the attention she deserves from your neighbors. You can do what you can do best: clean her out.
by
Anonymous08/30/13
Wishing
I love this story I wish I had a friend we could invite In from out of town to screw my wife while I watch! My biggest fantasy but she is unsure of it maybe some day!
by
Anonymous09/24/13
rock hard
I watched my wife fuck a freind of mine but had the goood luck of guiding his large cock to her cunt and rubbing them both as they fucked. when they both came I had the fortune of licking them both clean as my wife cheered me on.
by
Anonymous11/24/13
Dreams being true
A wonderful story! Wished it was my wife and I the onlooking hubby.
by
Anonymous01/08/14
lick it all
my friend fucked my wife while I watched but he did her doggy style while I licked them both, he ended up pulling out and his cock happened to go into my mouth while he shot his load. I loved it and now suck as much cock as I can.
by
Anonymous10/15/14
Been there, done that,
My wife has occasionally sucked and fucked other men we know. Never was and never will be cuckolded or have any homosexual tendencies and neither will you. A really gentle story of ménage à trois. Much more popular than one would imagine or believe. Not a hint of wife humiliation and that made it a great story for me.
What a great story and we could relate to it as Amy , husband and Greg are near our age.
My wife has never gone all the way but has come close.
Maye after reading this, she will-I hope so.
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Anonymous06/03/16
GREG IS A VERY LUCKY GUY; AMY'S HUSBAND IS AMONG THE LUCKIEST MEN ON EARTH; AS TO AMY, I COULD FALL IN LOVE WITH HER & I WISH SHE WERE MY WIFE...
An excellent story, poetic, romantic & ETOTIC!
They will hopefully meet up with Greg again.
Amy, i could fall in love with you! If you were my wife i would think i died and went to Heaven.
At tleast in part-1 you were not left out. Your nerration was brilliant and story line sequences perfect. I love "My wife fucked" stories and yours was the best ever I read, including mine. Minor typos are acceptable. I suggest you read mine under the author name "iloveall" and let me know if you liked any of them.
Raj
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Anonymous07/14/16
I totally agree with the comment by iloveall dated 06/24/16. I also agree with anon 06/03/16: i myself could fall in love with Amy
I am rating it five stars!
Hi everybody:
This is a wife-sharing story where the 3 characters respect each other & the wife cares for, & truly loves, her husband.
Trust me you won't go wrong if you read it.
by
Anonymous08/28/16
lovely couple, wonderful story
wonderful story, a lovely couple, they are completely innocent and they know how to enjoy sex life in a perfect way. a good experience for all of us. I hope that these and similar honest and innocent couples more often experiment with this kind of beautiful, challenging temptations. good luck.
It has been five years since I wrote thes stories. Amy and I are still very happily married. My wife was very supportive of capturing our adventure. We found some realities about the lifestyle prevented us from engaging in further adventures. It wasn't jealousy in our marriage, however, our anonymous friends were uncomfortable as changes took place in their lives and Amy and I had set rules. Amy is much too uncomfortable to search for a stranger where we cannot be sure of lifestyle etc.. We have enjoyed the adventure and thank you for all the positive comments!!
by
Anonymous11/25/16
A very nice story; it is erotic & romantic at the same time. I wished i were either the husband or Greg
Wuite a few men would gladly share his wife with his best ftiend but social norms inhibit them from doung anything about that. We all want to be respected by people around us.
A very good friend of mine, a widower, confessed to me that when his wife was alive and well, they occasionally let other men into their marriage. He went on to say that he had asked her to have sex with me privided she wanted it. According to him his wife declined because she not only knew my wife very well but loved her and respected her very much.
According to my friend, what he liked the most was to watch his wife being fucked by another man. In particular, when a man is on top of her, her legs over his shoulders, & he sqeezes her thighs and her butt. He told me that, apart from men who had fuvked her, i was the only person to whom he told the secret...
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Anonymous12/22/16
Great Read!
Love the stories in which it is unplanned with someone you know. I have found that there aren't that many. Thanks for sharing and it was nice to get the recent update that all continues to be well in your marriage!
Editing
Enjoyable tale, but could use some editing or proof reading. Several sentences had a word missing, especially the last half of the story.
Good story!
Keep on writing and keep on proof reading! Its always those last paragraphs that are HARDest to find the problems with. Probably has something to do with lack of blood in the brain at the time.
Wimpy cuck gives wife to "friend"
Wife ditches cuck to be with "friend", cuck is an loser.
Remaining Friends
This is my kind of story. It's discrete while being on the wild side. It's so realistic that I felt like I was right there. Thanks
Liked it
I like how realistic and believable it was. And it wasn't a slut wife, behind the back cheating story. It was hot, sexy and this is the type of wife I'd love to have!
Not a bad story ...
BUT ... as has been said, it needs editing. Look at it yourself when you finish writing ... then submit it for proofing by one of the authors on this site so they can pick away at it and make corrections.
Pay no attention to the "Bibile-Thumpers" as they love the stories in "Loving Wives", but hate themselves for reading them afterwards.
"I like how realistic and believable it was. And it wasn't a slut wife, behind the back cheating story. It was hot, sexy and this is the type of wife I'd love to have!"
This is the type of woman you would want to have as your wife? someone that needs to fuck someone else to get off while you watch? well I guess some men don't satisfy their women and some women don't satisfy thier husbands. Go and talk to your wife and see how many people she can fuck and how many creampies you are going to eat.
Brilliant !!!!
What a story !!!! So sweet and so hot, same time !!!!!! Keep up the good (very good I mean) job !!!!!
Elena = f27 from Greece !
Done with respect and care
Nicely done! A bit more editing would have been good.
Woderful First Story
This story had emotions and feelings. It was believeable and an enjoyable read from begining to end.I look forward to reading much more from you. Please keep up the great work.
sexy story!
Good job, would love to read more of your work.
Great Job!!
Looking forward to more from you.
Made me wet.
Very erotic. Made my nipples hard.
Jo
Very nicely done
Great story from start to finish!
Wonderful
Very believable and hot story. Thanks for sharing.
LOVE the story! Can't wait to read more!
OMG!
Ive allways wanted exactly this to happen
Between my wife and i, this story ive dreamed about
countless times! I could not beleave what I was reading
was my biggest fantasy and could not hold back and unwillingly
shot my load in my pants whitout even touching myself!
What a hell of an orgasm this was! Now I have a stain on my pants!
IM AT WORK! LOL!
I agree!
I agree with the previous two comments. I think it is a great story, very well told AND it has a nice positive ending for the husband and wife (something many of the other stories do not). Kudos to you!!
done with a fucking whore and her cuckold
you guys are fucking stupid....she a whore you dickless morons
Sounds like a good time for all, well done
Done this once and have never been so excited before or since.
thats what i want
That's what I want to happen in our marriage. I'd love for my wife to fuck a friend . Iv been working on it .
negative feed back
Whats with the negative feed back. I thought it was a great story. The people that leave negative feed back and call women whores ------- Move on if you do not like these type of stories. Maybe be you should read men on men stories. That is why stories are in differant sections, move on. Keep the stories cuumming love it.
it is a story
and people can comment on a fucking story so knock off being the god damn pc police. everyone comments on stories, all stories, for as long as people have been writing them.
1*
Don't need to say more.
"I wished I could help Greg by allowing him to fuck my wife"
Greater love hath no man for a friend than to put his wife down to be laid...
Incidentally, this story is riddled with missing words. I suggest re-reading submissions before posting.
horny wife
i know how greg feel my wife also fuck my friend and after that our sex was great
@Erotronaut
No need to dispair. Your wife is getting all the attention she deserves from your neighbors. You can do what you can do best: clean her out.
Wishing
I love this story I wish I had a friend we could invite In from out of town to screw my wife while I watch! My biggest fantasy but she is unsure of it maybe some day!
rock hard
I watched my wife fuck a freind of mine but had the goood luck of guiding his large cock to her cunt and rubbing them both as they fucked. when they both came I had the fortune of licking them both clean as my wife cheered me on.
Dreams being true
A wonderful story! Wished it was my wife and I the onlooking hubby.
lick it all
my friend fucked my wife while I watched but he did her doggy style while I licked them both, he ended up pulling out and his cock happened to go into my mouth while he shot his load. I loved it and now suck as much cock as I can.
Been there, done that,
My wife has occasionally sucked and fucked other men we know. Never was and never will be cuckolded or have any homosexual tendencies and neither will you. A really gentle story of ménage à trois. Much more popular than one would imagine or believe. Not a hint of wife humiliation and that made it a great story for me.
Wow
What a great story and we could relate to it as Amy , husband and Greg are near our age.
My wife has never gone all the way but has come close.
Maye after reading this, she will-I hope so.
GREG IS A VERY LUCKY GUY; AMY'S HUSBAND IS AMONG THE LUCKIEST MEN ON EARTH; AS TO AMY, I COULD FALL IN LOVE WITH HER & I WISH SHE WERE MY WIFE...
An excellent story, poetic, romantic & ETOTIC!
They will hopefully meet up with Greg again.
Amy, i could fall in love with you! If you were my wife i would think i died and went to Heaven.
1*
cuck shit.
Fantastic story
Dear Boy,
At tleast in part-1 you were not left out. Your nerration was brilliant and story line sequences perfect. I love "My wife fucked" stories and yours was the best ever I read, including mine. Minor typos are acceptable. I suggest you read mine under the author name "iloveall" and let me know if you liked any of them.
Raj
I totally agree with the comment by iloveall dated 06/24/16. I also agree with anon 06/03/16: i myself could fall in love with Amy
I am rating it five stars!
Hi everybody:
This is a wife-sharing story where the 3 characters respect each other & the wife cares for, & truly loves, her husband.
Trust me you won't go wrong if you read it.
lovely couple, wonderful story
wonderful story, a lovely couple, they are completely innocent and they know how to enjoy sex life in a perfect way. a good experience for all of us. I hope that these and similar honest and innocent couples more often experiment with this kind of beautiful, challenging temptations. good luck.
From the author
It has been five years since I wrote thes stories. Amy and I are still very happily married. My wife was very supportive of capturing our adventure. We found some realities about the lifestyle prevented us from engaging in further adventures. It wasn't jealousy in our marriage, however, our anonymous friends were uncomfortable as changes took place in their lives and Amy and I had set rules. Amy is much too uncomfortable to search for a stranger where we cannot be sure of lifestyle etc.. We have enjoyed the adventure and thank you for all the positive comments!!
A very nice story; it is erotic & romantic at the same time. I wished i were either the husband or Greg
Wuite a few men would gladly share his wife with his best ftiend but social norms inhibit them from doung anything about that. We all want to be respected by people around us.
A very good friend of mine, a widower, confessed to me that when his wife was alive and well, they occasionally let other men into their marriage. He went on to say that he had asked her to have sex with me privided she wanted it. According to him his wife declined because she not only knew my wife very well but loved her and respected her very much.
According to my friend, what he liked the most was to watch his wife being fucked by another man. In particular, when a man is on top of her, her legs over his shoulders, & he sqeezes her thighs and her butt. He told me that, apart from men who had fuvked her, i was the only person to whom he told the secret...
Great Read!
Love the stories in which it is unplanned with someone you know. I have found that there aren't that many. Thanks for sharing and it was nice to get the recent update that all continues to be well in your marriage!
LIKE
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