The First Time

Here is a question

why is this poetry? I could be wrong, but it does look like rather a predictable porn story. What do you think? I did not vote.

It maybe a bit more on there story side,
But man did it make me wet all the same

perhaps you should submit as a short story instead.....

Prose Poetry

since it's been mentioned 3 times now, here's why i didn't submit it as a story:

"Prose poetry: poetry written in prose instead of using verse but preserving poetic qualities such as heightened imagery and emotional affect." - Wikipedia

it's not a short story; it's just a different style of poetry. :)