Anya Becomes a Slave

I think it's very good. A few misspelled words but excellent :) good job!

Not bad

pretty good first effort. watch your spelling and grammar. might be good to seek out an editor to help with that.

there are a few spelling and grammar errors but i think youre doing great
i really enjoyed it ;)

QUITE GOOD

This is quite a good story and has plenty of potential to be a very good multi-installment story. Spelling errors aside i would like to have seen a bit more of Anya's emotions also some background on how Ms. Davis knew Anya to be submissive.

What??

You mean to sit there and admit that you have Failed to write a second Chapter to this story? Contemplate and then administer your own punishment before you get to work on the next in this series.

More!