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An Immortal Slave Ch. 04

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by Anonymous07/19/11

More PLEASE

Hey HellSpawn, these are AWESOME! When is the next chapter coming?

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by J0SE11/21/11

Hmmmm...I wonder what happened. When I started readin this chapter I felt like I had memory loss. Otherwise, I like the chapter

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by Anonymous12/31/11

i wanna know lol

I would like to know what happened. Are you a writer in college? I love this series, just a note though, watch the grammer and puncuation ok? Otherwise great stuff !

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