The italian mob boss, the black girl (also called Victoria), the running away, even the blue eyes. . . Way too alike.
A lot! Hope you keep going. And Seven Days is one of my favorite stories on here, and this didn't remind me of it at all.
I like this story thus far. You gave enough to give insight into the characters' personalities and still left us in suspense. I look forward to reading the next segment :)
Well I can't say I don't love a good interracial story BUT!!!! I understand that authors get inspiration from the works of others and may want to channel their own creativity and spin on things but "Seven Days" by Soular was HUGELY popular & this will almost seem like a remake ..... ESPECIALLY with the female being named VICTORIA! .... would want to see where you take it but many people might not like it.. Do your thing though =)
I like it, has a lot of potential to be a good story. Please update soon.
Interesting start. I have read seven days, and I have to say apart from the female characters sharing a name and ethnicity as well as damian being a mob boss, i think it's premature to assume this story resembles soular's "seven days".
Reading this story I didn't even think about Soular's "seven days" yes it is a huge hit but every interracial story with a black women and mob boss isn't a spin or rip off of it. Give it some time to develop before jumping the gun. The chapter was short but it was good, I can't wait to hear the back story and the development of this story
I really like this I can't wait to read more. I have read "Seven Days" several times and I don't think that this is anything like it. But like the others said its to early to say that this story is like that one. Keep it up! I'm hooked I'm all about a good story where the male lead is a mob boss.
I want moore.....
A very interesting start. Off to read the next chapter.
Do men really think we are such suckers for the L- word? Really??? Really?????...
... A new day dawns and it ain't necessarily about that anymore. Please let's level the playing field, ok?
When we(women) ask for something at least ACT like you want
us to have it. A small thing to ask for...........maybe?
Well written and exciting so far.
Damien and Victoria....let's see what mischief they will get into!
Hate that this wasn't completed, would've probably been interesting
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