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A Captured Heart Ch. 02

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by Queen_Vicki06/01/11

Thanks

I would like to send a big thank you to my editor. For all the wonderful work he has done. Thanks for making this chapter perfect.

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by Anonymous06/02/11

impressive

i like the story please continue

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by mokkelke06/07/11

aha this one had an editor and it showed. there were a lot less typo's and missing words.

still liking the story and will be watching for the next chapter.

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