All Comments on 'Command and Control Ch. 03'

Chapter 3 is a bit of a let down. After having to wait 6 months, I would have expected more than 2700 words.

I do feel badly about so long between the first chapter and these last two. I'm trying to balance between getting stories posted more quickly vs. developing more of the story first, and sometimes I end up leaning too far toward one end or the other. But I do appreciate your views.

Depth of depravity depicted, is directly related to the writer's experience undergone! No doubt disgusting female demands take more time, firstly to reconcile with her anal actions demanded, then to put into appropriate words to describe a humiliating 'erection' occurence! At least your poor penis & outer genitalia were left in suitable working order, for next time?

So dirty... I love it!!!!

Bob the asshole is a great character and clearly the hypnotism is powerful, why can't we hear more fun tales of retribution and domination? Love the symbolism too.

Love this story line so far! When will you get to writing part 4 and more?

Fat girls getting anallingus? It was good up to this chapter too. Disgusting.

Why do you find analingus on fat girls disgusting? Is it analingus or fat girls that you find disgusting? Many other readers enjoyed this aspect of the story.

excellent..hope you have plans to do more..I find stories better with less

characters like that..last part of any sequels you do may consider him ending up

as total toilet slave to a woman..anyway I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Thank you for your comments. I've been in a bit of a dry spell recently, but do hope to get back to my writing