All Comments on 'Instructions from Anne Ch. 01'

by sunjimmy9810

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Nitro70652Nitro70652almost 13 years ago
4 stars, hoping for more

The story line is actually unique. Here we have a male with no foreseeable signs of anything but masculine behavior. He is being led down a path... trained, and his curiosity and love for his wife are going to be what takes him to his destiny... apparently, from the title. Good writing, I do hope it continues.

HarryHaversackersHarryHaversackersalmost 13 years ago
Unusual

It's highly unusual for the woman to be the driving force behind a FLR, but what the heck, it wouldn't be as interesting a story if it were realistic.

BTW, dominate is a verb, while dominant is the adjective.

slave2womanslave2womanalmost 13 years ago
superb

somehow at the start of the story, i got the idea i missed a part, but i kept on reading and reading realizing the beginning is as in a move.

Superb story, hope to read soon more sequels.

Great job, You're a natural, keep on writing...

rainbow001rainbow001almost 13 years ago
Nice start

Thank you for sharing, looking forward to see where you go with this.

mkbishop702mkbishop702over 10 years ago
wish there where more wives willing to do this.

What a great start cant wait to see how far she goes what a wife!

Plucky69Plucky69about 8 years ago
...can't wait

I'm looking forward to the continuation. Thus was very well written.

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