Breaking Through The Ice Ch. 08

Must you make me wait a whole week?!?

If it's possible to die from suspense, that is what will happen to me! I don't know how much more I can take! Btw...I think this is my favorite story of yours yet...

AH

OMG SO GOOD. I absolutely love this story. I wait every week for the new post! Can't wait to see what next week has in store for them!

I burst out laughing at the Cap/not a Devil conversation. Very nice, and very nice chapter.

So good!

love it. everything about it. Great chapter!

Fantastic!

Out of all your stories this is my favourite, Drew & Mina just make me smile, please don't make us wait a week.

Lawrence?

Now that was a development I never saw coming!

Thanks for spinning such a wonderful yarn.

GE

well that was just mean

painful!

It is physically painful to wait a whole week for the next chapter. You are killing me, especially after this chapter.
I hope Lawrence get run over by a bus.

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...really...really dude (-_-) so uncool. love these two the banter is priceless!!!! i love all your work and I'm really really hoping i don't have to wait a week to see how this convo is gonna play out...i bet her conniving sister had something to do with it didn't she?!? smh anyway love it thank you for posting and i can't wait to see what happens next.

btw...is Brody gonna get a turn? I'd like to see him squirm, as much grief as he gives... just a thought.

A WHOLE WEEK??!!

I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story, but I cannot believe you left us on such a cliffie! As the other person said, it'd be fun to watch Brody get his story :)

Keep it coming

Still enjoying the story. Looking anxiously for more

Until the next episode...

Major sigh for how enjoyable these two are, enjoyable and sexy. Something had to burst their cuteness, but I didn't expect the ex. Well done! Thanks for another great one-as always! So now I'm uber excited to see where you take this little conflict. Happy Friday

oooh, a cliffhanger

I don't think that was in the early reads -- but well done. ;) Good to see Drew and Mina finally got, shall we say, together. Going well -- can't wait for more. :)

Too. Many. Questions!

First though, I love how Drew and Mina are coming together as a couple; how he has helped her to discover her confidence and how she is developing as a person. The way they tease in their conversations is fantastic.

It's also fun how you're presenting the growing relationship between the brothers, showing Carter's maturing as a young man.

Now that I think about it, I suppose I don't have that many questions. I simply wonder why Lawrence is showing up now and how he found out where she is. I have my suspicions, but am waiting to see how you set it out.

NOO!!!

I have a sneaky suspicion that Mina's sister called Lawrence. You're stories are always the best!!

aaaahhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!

I don't think I saw that coming with the ex. Still waiting to see how Carter let's Drew know what his plans are with school. And I can't believe you left us on such a cliff hanger. Can't wait to see what Drew does with Lawrence when he finds out, hopefully it will involve something with taking him to a dark alley. I will be waiting until next week.

Yet again...

My patience has been rewarded yet again with another excellent chapter. In true MugsyB form, you've left us all hanging on untill next week... How deliciously cruel.

To put it simply...

That last chapter was pure magic!
MugsyB - you are mind-blowing!!
Loved loved loveeeddddd it ;)

A Storyteller in Top Form

Crackling good!

I agree that a week is too long --

A week between is killing us - and especially with this development. Please!! BTW - this is an excellent story!

I'm with everyone here... so so so so so good!!

Wow. almost speechless here, but... So much passion and tenderness. It is so satisfying to see Mina starting to love freely and accept herself with confidence. Drew is amazing - one of my favourites, I think.

And then Lawrence drops in like the proverbial lead balloon.

Please give Mina the strength to stomp all over his bony little body... (lol! not sure where that came from!)

I have loved all of your hockey stories but this one is my absolute favorite! Knew Lawrence's dumb ass was going to show up eventually. Can't wait to see how they deal with it!

that was definitely not the carter/cooking school bomb i was expecting to read about.

Just keeps getting better! I can't wait to read how they deal with him turning up, prompted by the horrible sister maybe? I hope you get a chance to write and post the next chapter soon.

WOW!!!!!

I love this story. I found myself at work the other day drifting off to Drew and Mina's world. Your such an excellent writer, so much feeling and passion. I look forward to every chapter and every story. I have always been a hockey fan and definitely appreciate the sexy men who warm up the ice, but now I find them even more provocative . . . . wish I could find my own Drew.

More hockey needed

This story needs much more hockey. Not finger biting but bone crunching. Too limp so far.

WOW!!!

OMG... I dont think I can wait another week to find out what happens next! but Lawrence? REALLY? lol... Amazing story! Cant wait for the next chapter!

OH NO!!!

Lawrence? And this thing with Carter hanging there? There's misconstrued trouble ahead!

BTW, It's FRIDAY!!! I checked 5 times yesterday for my Mugsy fix! At least it's here. Yea!

I hate you I hate you I hate you...

That is the worst friggin' cliffhanger ***ever***. I'm hoping that Mina makes use of all the tips and tricks she's learned with her filet and chef's knives. THAT would make the cliffhanger OK. lol.

Well done, thanks.

Uh oh.

Trouble is looming. I hope whatever misunderstanding that's coming up won't keep them apart for too long. They are just too adorable together.

Such a great story, I look forward to every chapter.

Love, love, love

As a single girl, I both love and hate your stories ;) I love that they remind me of what new love can be and hate them a little for reminding me of what I've never had. But keep them coming- the love conquers all :) Thank you, Mugsy!

You....

I think im in love with this story....its awsome 0-0 better than any fanfiction iv ever read .Good bless u miss MugsyB

best story

I love your stories and none has made me more compelled to comment than this one. This is your best story, I absolutely love the cliffhanger... As if I couldn't get enough of your stories already!! Can't wait to see what happens!

WOW! :)

MORE :)

I just love your stories. Your profile is one of my first stops on this site and I'm always thrilled to see updates! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter in this one especially, the characters are easy to relate to and the story line is super adorable. Keep up the good writing!

Wicked...

...mean cliff hanger!

I have read ALL of your stories and hands down this is my favorite one thus far! I do hope you plan publishing cause I want it on my kindle :)

Loved the Caps/Devils line, and how she joked about Brody. That was priceless. Brody is a free agent soon, so if he gets resigned to the Caps, you just may have to write about him next! And I can't even get my head around Obie getting married! Its amazing what can happen in a fictional world :)