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The Blushing Bride

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by Anonymous

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by shykitte06/03/11

Beautifully written! :)

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by Anonymous06/04/11

good stuff

it was a very very well written story.

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by sblazer22706/04/11

beautiful

lovely story

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by Anonymous06/04/11

the best story i've read in weeks

I love this! more in this story line or anyother, your writing is awesome!

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by Anonymous06/05/11

nice

Nice sexy stuff.
I kept getting confused as to why in a Medieval village a blacksmith could afford the luxury of a private room, and a woman was wearing a corset and bloomers (which are rather Victorian). Other than that, it's quite lovely.

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by Anonymous06/25/11

Nicely Done...

hope you write more stories

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by Anonymous11/04/11

More!

Please continue! Your story seems so promising, and one can hope that they are going to be head over heels for one another by the end. I have habitually checked your page over the past months hoping for your next installment :).

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by Anonymous07/23/12

More please!

I agree with the first commenter, I would love to read more!

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by Anonymous09/18/12

This is so well written that I pop in for a visit every once in a while hoping you have either added another chapter or started something new. I really hope you do. -DC

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by Anonymous12/15/12

Wow!

You have a good man and a true dom for a character. Very very nice. Thank you!

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by panda187012/19/12

wow

More please!!!

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by angie1901/12/13

Aw damn!

How is she going to give him a blowjob this quickly? I think a few more fucks would be a better way of convincing her since even though she's curious she's still a bit angry and afraid (not to mention she doesn't know how) Unless I understood wrong and he was about to fuck her, not make her give him a blowjob lol.

5 stars, I thoroughly enjoyed it, well written as well. Please update soon (and if you are going to go for the blowjob I hope you make it work because I don't see it happening yet lol)

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by Anonymous02/11/13

She's annoying.

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by Buxombeauty203/30/13

More chapters....

I enjoyed the story so far. Can you finish it plz.

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by Anonymous05/26/13

Unreal

and I don't mean good !

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by Anonymous06/09/13

Please update this and add more!

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by BadCittyLady08/26/13

Great beginning!

I really hope that you get this review and will post more to this story! It is great! also if you dont post more to this story at least write more stories you have great potential. :)

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by Anonymous09/21/13

Love love love this

I will never get tired of reading this story over and over because it's kinda sweet. This is probably the only non-consent story i truly like on this site. Can you please make a whole story of this? Please?

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by Anonymous10/15/13

Loved it

I love the powerful man taking his wife,
knowing how to use his power to win her over....love it can't wait for more....:)

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by Anonymous12/02/13

love it

beautiful. I love how he did it. though love. it was nice to read. I really had the feeling he was in love and lusted after his beautiful headstrong wife. two thumbs up

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by Anonymous01/01/14

Actually; he's an egotistical pig

he doesn't really care about her,Similar to Gaston & Belle (Beauty & the Beast); they are not suitable. He's a brute; any man who truly cares for his wife would want to be loving first, then over zealous and passionate. He only cares about himself, his wants, his needs, doesn't give a rats ass about her. IF he truly cared he'd have been more romantic, more seductive. Met yesterday, married tomorrow; she doesn't have any reason to love or respect him and he just brutalized her; that is very traumatic for women. IF he's as big as implied; her could do a lot of physical damage when she wasn't prepared and ready for his size.

I made the mistake of clicking on the name because I was jumping between ROMANCE stories; unfortunately this is BS Non. Rel / Non Cons, Grrrrrr

Name should have been THE BRUTALIZED BRIDE

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by Day1i1y01/25/14

Simply Wonderful

I really enjoyed this story. It held my interest all the way to the end. The characters' feelings were easy for me to believe. I think a lot of understanding about the groom was conveyed with very few words.... (I like to have a little bit left to my imagination.) I liked the way the story was written. There were only a few sentences that I would have tweaked to make them flow better (for me). Over all, I'd say "Well done!" And Thank you for this pleasant little escape :)

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by Buxombeauty201/30/14

Want more

I know groom is a little brutish but i think the bride can turn him into big cuddly teddy bear r hav fun trying, right? Not ready for it too end. How about couple more chapters r epilogue?

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by Twilightfan04/19/14

From The Start

After seeing just how scared she was, he could have showed that loving/caring/gentle side from the start...

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by lilah_rose05/14/14

Fantastic!

Loved this story. Perfect claiming of his woman.

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by tazz31705/14/14

IS THE BLUSHING CAUSED BY

guilt or enamored. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Anonymous09/27/14

Terrible

stopped reading with the constant "stop!" "stop it!" and the "Gah!"
give it up now or learn to put yourself better in the positions of the people you write about, feel what they are feeling and if your responses in real life are like those you wrote about then you have not lived enough to write something with passion

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by Anonymous10/04/14

No wonder they call them the Dark Ages.

This was simply terrible.

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by Alberta Al10/22/14

Works for me

Works really well.

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by Anonymous12/10/14

morons! only ignorant historically illiterate airheads (80% of the "educated" which means "partied through college" populace) and the "educated by Hollywood" call "them" the "Dark Ages"!

No actual, self-respecting, knowledgeable historian still pretends to acknowledge that a period referred to as "the Dark Ages" ever existed. Hell, even fucking Wikipedia acknowledges that much! Or it used to...god knows what that page says now given the editing quality of current wikimedia pages. Point being...you are imbeciles. Educated by television. News anchors use the same fucking term sometimes, like the morons they are...but the internet can be a smarter place, no? The Middle Ages were not, in fact, a period of scientific illiteracy. In fact, many of the most vital scientific discoveries in the history of humanity were made in that time period. But we denounce it today as...the Dark Ages. Because every time period looks down on the past and thinks it is better. It's called chronological snobbery. Seriously. There's a name for what George Santayana is always quoted warning against. And every. Single. Individual. That utilizes the term "Dark Ages". Is indulging in it. Which, surprise, surprise, means 90% of humanity that knows of the terms existence. We are a species of ignoramuses. Take comfort in your shared foolishness. ;)

PS: loved the story! Nicely romantic and affectionate, which is and was not always the case in arranged marriages. Hell, having him give her oral made me simultaneously cheer and laugh! What a guy! How many fellows, given license to ignore "no" would give a damn about the gals happiness? Especially in a culture where saying no after a wedding is a massive slap in the face? I know I would, but I loved that he did too! Just truly a fun handling of a normally distasteful topic; something which a historian can appreciate. Arranged marriage portrayed as not evil. Nice. Even if the brain-impaired don't understand. :)

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by Anonymous01/02/15

To the comment below me:

I salute you!

As for the story, I love it. Two thumbs up!

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by Anonymous01/29/15

he grabbed her by her 'waste"?

ill conceived, poorly written and not proofed.

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by Anonymous03/22/15

Haters gonna hate

Love the mix of non-consent and developing romance--sexy yet sweet.
Glanced through the other comments and I'm thoroughly convinced you should ignore the flack from people who should take less time talking smack and more time reading the history and women's lit textbooks that they were apparently looking for when they found your story.

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by cupcake_92305/03/15

MORE please

Like to have this continued...

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by Erika28105/30/15

continue please

I would love read more about this couple

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by Anonymous09/07/15

love it

I think the story is great don't listen to the haters and I hope you continue it. Its your story don't let people tell you how to write it if they didn't like it they shouldn't have read it. That's their problem not yours

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by Anonymous09/22/15

You're amazing

I loved the story! You should continue writing stories like this. You're the best🙌🏼

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by Anonymous10/06/15

This was stupid

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by chixjinxbdsm10/18/15

I was looking for morivation

And here it is!
Awesome story but I am heart broken that there's only one story.
Please write more . You have a good sense of what to touch and what not to push (pardon the pun)
Hungry for more....
Keep writing !

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by AllyLark10/30/15

needs to be a scene in a movie

If this gets made into a film I propose the lead guy from 300 to play him and she will be played by...me of course.

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by Anonymous11/04/15

aaaaaargh

When will the girls in Never-Neverland learn --
1. You don't look at the Neanderthal.
2. You don't speak to the Neanderthal.
3. If any of the above occurs by accident, don't wait till the next day to run away and disguise yourself as a gladiator or astronaut.

Evebroughtanaxthistime

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by StriderJohn12/01/15

Rape

Not keen on stories about girls being forced into marriage and subsequently raped, regardless of whether the girl eventually realises she enjoys sex, it should be her choice.

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by Katatude4Life12/09/15

Never in my life have I heard anyone yell nor scream "GAH!" during sex

Nor in the beginning. What sounds do you make? GAH?

Just a brief example:
Gasping, writhing, moaning with pleasure her whimpers of fear becoming pleasurable little squeaks and groans as her body shook with orgasmic tremors...

Never did anyone moan, whimper, cry out or scream, "GAH!"

Maybe a bit of a search into descriptive words and really listening to yourself when you pleasure your own body will help you.

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by thebug3704/10/16

GAH - KATE-E-DID-4-LIFE

Tis the story from days-of-yor and GAH was likely said over and over. Oh yes, there was no supreme court to say same sex marriage was okay. I remember blacksmiths and perhaps you are the reason some were born to late. This was a delight to read and showed the tender side of a large man who worked by his hands and brains. Not like some of the males and females of today who only know how to stroke a key on a computer of Iphone. Gawd, what have we become to find fault in everything in print or real life? Those who found fault with this story and other presentations on these pages should stop reading the minute you find something not to your liking. Get a life and watch Oral Roberts' reruns or his son or money grubbing religious shows. - - - they will love you sending money to them. Hope you catch my drift.

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by Anonymous05/13/16

Yes, because sex is super flowery and all rose colored. Because it's perfect the first time, not awkward at all, and Virgins aren't at all afraid of taking that bridge into full-fledged maturity. So what if she said "Gah!"? So what? That's literally the most realistic thing I've ever read in a sex scene, so stop trying to be Shakespeare and just enjoy it.

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by Anonymous06/09/16

GAH and minion speak

I wish to state for the record that I have said GAhhhh during sex. It's a cross between God and ahhhhhhhh! My amazing hubby calls this and some of my other strange garbled words my sexy minion speak. I loved this story. Very well written and more realistic in it's descriptive words then some other stories I've read.

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by Anonymous02/22/17

At least learn English.

It's a "waist" not a waste

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Just had to read it again. This is a real gem. It just keeps getting better. He's still a Neanderthal though.

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by Anonymous03/07/17

Thank you

I loved it. 😊

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by JJMemaw062304/02/17

Exactly!!!

What they all said and more. There are numerous unintelligible words spoken and half spoken during sex and a virgin that isn't sure what to do, so much more. I remember. Loved this one and have read and reread this again. Please keep writing!!!

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