All Comments on 'Waiting for Faith'

by alexcarr

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
hope

I couldn't get past all the errors to finish the story. You need an editor.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Age is no barrier

A great story, or is it real. never mind the errors, it is what every 65 year old and over hopes for

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Edit Please

I like the premise, but was hard to read through the typos

Phxray54Phxray54almost 13 years ago
Where...

there is hope there is faith. Very good indeed. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
So many errors I couldn't read it!!!

Get an editor, or use the tools on your own computer.

BigJohn601BigJohn601almost 13 years ago
I think I may have to look into this Retirement Community idea....

While my wife's libido has waned in her sixties mine hasn't and I would like to find an eager woman my age. Your story idea was sound but an editor would have helped greated. Don't give up and I will look for future postings.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Proof read

The idea for the story is good but PLEASE have somebody at least look it over.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Yes i am 60 and i enjoy with my wife at least 3 times a week. I do enjoy sex now in a refreshing and caring way than the rush animal young age sex

True

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Concept vs. Execution

The concept of the story could be great, but the poor execution made it impossible to read. I agree with the others, get an editor, but at least you should have used spell check.

alexcarralexcarrover 12 years agoAuthor
Waiting foir Faith

Sorry I rushed it without proper editing, I shall take extra care now I know there are you guys out there who like to read me.

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