If Erika is hotter in real life, you'd better double your fire insurance.
Quibbles follow as usual.
Very, very seductive. I wish I could meet Erika and be played with.
Look forward to them meeting Callie.
More, I hope?
Can't wait for the next installment! Very hot, great writing!
Erika n Claire HOT, hope it stays that way.
Well done. I enjoyed the seduction, the surrender, the betrayal, and everything that followed. Best of all, it is entirely believable. I don't know where you go from here, but I look forward to more.
Yes it can't end like this... they might both die... Loved it. Thanks for sharing!!!
OMG, When Ericka first called her "whore", I nearly collapsed. I want to be in the sequel. xxx Love it.
There will be more to come, yes?
This ranks ways up there on the scale of excellent erotica
Great writing and incredibly hot. Would enjoy seeing more between these two women.
by Erika, and I will be forever grateful to her for pointing me this way. I do not think I have read a better written story. It is all the more interesting from a personal point of view in that I know at least one of the characters, which brings it that much closer to heart.
I would love to have a more interactive connection with you, but for privacy, I will just ask you to see my info page on our mutual social site where you connected to me. My email is there, as is my IM id. I would love to hear from you and find out at first hand what Erika is raving about.
Your newest fan
I was just bemoaning the lack of quality lesbian erotica -and this was definitely erotic- here. I, like you, find a mature woman, a woman in full possession of her sexuality, is a beautiful thing.
Your writing is superb, your sex and sexual tension are artful in their execution, and your characters... your characters live and breath. And unlike other lesbian writers here (of late), your themes of dominance were subtle, nuanced and arousing. Most writers here (of late) execute the same themes with a ham-fisted, crude approach, when a scalpel is called for. I, personally, feel domination is a like a potent spice: just the right amount will enhance a dish, while too much makes it inedible, one-dimensional and harsh (like trying to eat a large spoonful of cinnamon, dry). The end result of such skill is a story that reads more like steamy romance (despite the nature of their relationship and Erika's prowess, I got a definitely feeling of care from her; whore's can be loved) and less like cheap internet porn for fap-happy lackwits and the unimaginative.
Thank you for writing up to your audience rather than pandering down to them.
Your thoughts are delicious indeed. I hope the next chapter is as wonderful.
It's just... too bad Erika has a husband ;3 I think Claire and Erika would make for a dynamic couple.
Holy shit...that was in the top 10 hottest acts I have read on this site and it wasn't even that raunchy. Please write more about dominant women, I can't even express how wonderful this story is. 5/5!
Yes this is really great I was there right with Claire!
Really enjoyed the intensity of the story....can't wait to find out how it goes with them meeting Callie!
driven to touch myself. bravo dt...
what a very hot horny story, brilliant first part would really ,love another part or parts. such a real turn on.
reading this was so very exciting and oh so very hot and horny.
Great story! Please continue...need to know what happens next!
thanks for your email, gabimars. I tried to reply but your email address came up as invalid
I think I'll dream of Erika all my nights...
thank you for writing so beautiful and exciting stories, Delicious! Hmm... deliciously naughty, I would rather say.
The best I've ever read. I loved and thank you.
Great title and great story. The interaction between the two charachters was believable and the story though fast paced was well rendered, with hot sex scenes and sizzling dialogue.
I love your characters and your descriptions. I can't wait to read what happens next.
Brooke (Brookell on Lit)
And Erika is a real person? Can I meet her in a restaurant? Please? GOD!!!
A great beginning to what I hope is a great tale of obsession.
A little bit more resistance from Claire would have been nice but the descriptive prose were great. It made the sex between the two red hot.
... but I already knew that. And I loved the storyline. The last line is a killer! Fabulous. Trouble is I now realise I have competition in my quest to infiltrate every deep dark corner of your gorgeous fithy mind
I frequently find myself browsing Literotica while sitting on the couch next to my wife. It gives me a little thrill when she leans over, glimpses what I'm reading, raises an eyebrow and then goes back to whatever she's doing.
Sometimes I come across a story that I don't want to share. A story that is too... close, I guess, to my fantasies and mirrors so explicitly my inner sluttish desires. A story that makes me feel selfish and dirty and dangerous and focused on giving in to my own submissive fantasies.
This was such a story.
Well written and verrrry provocative. There are (or can be) times when we just cannot help ourselves. Thanks for putting this into perspective (as in, spiraling-out-of perspective).
I'm just about panting as I imagine Callie's reaction (and participation, if you please).
An extremely hot story. I love a story that explores the resistance-to-complete-desire theme. Can't wait to read more of your stories!
I loved your story! Very good writing.
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