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I love the story so far...five stars
Excellent start.
Five.
Great start cant wait to read the rest.
hmm
Okay not sure where this story is going but i plan to buckle up for the ride.
LOOOVVVEEE IT
V3
Interesting...
For a newcomer on a sex based story site you've managed to create something entertaining w/o any mention of a sexual act- that's an achivement to be proud of. Keep it up- good writing is something to be enjoyed.
uh oh
looks like johnny may have some competition.
If the
reist of the story even comes close to fulfilling the expectations you've raised so far, you'll have created a super special treat for Literotica readers. Love your writing!
What a triangle!
I sense a wonderful triangle coming on and someone's going to have to fight for what they want. I didn't expect a 3rd person to enter into the plan but, damn I can't wait for the next chapter to come out.
Magnificent!
156 stars!
please go on!
MORE! MORE! PLEASE...
A very nice start.. hope you'll post the next chapters VERY SOON!
pLS. don't keep us waiting. Thanks!
I'm loving this
Great Start
Good!
this is really great story
i so hope you continue it i cant wait for more sooner than later please
Delightfully delectable.......
***** and lip smackin' to boot!!!
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