Bob knows how to write some gross weird stories. Sometimes they are a little over the top like this one, but I'll have to hand it to him, the dude sure writes a lot of stories.
Thanks Bob. Not quite my cup of tea, but I appreciate the effort.
I like your retribution stories better than the willing cuck stories. This tale, while well written, definitely did not float my boat. It sank like a stone.
. . . a nice new truck, and the bills are getting paid. No wonder he has a grin on his face even though it's there permanently with a little crust. Okay, it isn't Hemingway, certainly not Shakespeare although the bard was a lusty rapper at times, it must be the leader of the church of the subgenius; Praise Bob!!!
nice if your are into that sort of thing but sadly i'm not.
the old English meaning for a clock-old.
a man who can not satify his lady sexually.
who then get tared and fathered in chicken feathers, if he complains, that she has sex with another man.
old saxon.
so the real defination of a clokold is some one that complains about there woman cheating on them, as they clearly can not satisfy her.
even so this story to me was not my cup of tea. as such 1 star.
reasons..
i dislike the modern meaning of a cluck-old, in story's.
i prefer male domination.
or
Delmer that leaves you hanging on the edge to see which path they take.
he did not cop out or wimped out he was clearly into shearing his wife. to me that odd. unless it an open relationship.
fine, to me that just pointless. open mirages from the get go fine. anythign else other than an open honest relation ship is.. mis trust. to me that why i find these cluck story's to be... lame. she dont trust him or respect him she may love him, but to me there can not be a relationship without respect, trust, openness & love. 1 out of 4 = a failed relationship..
she make him eat out her marks cum. no respect.
she did not tell him about the side job. no trust, or openness
the cash in the account is not an issue. it's common to have separate accosts for your own personal spending.
a one way relation ship to me, is to me, not what i call a fair deal. as such she was trash. she hookered for a car for him. a car they clearly did not need. and so there was no point to it??? so she had to have an other reason thrill and excitement.. so she hookered because she could, and felt the thrill was worth it. the car was a bribe. more a guilty here a one off prezcent for all the crempies.
to me it was test. do you wish to be kept man or are you into a fair relation ship. if yoru into fair relation ship's then yoru lookignto what i did ot get that car and act on it. if not your just my pet toy..
persoanly i cant see why or nay motive on her part for doign hwat she did to him and still marrying him other then beigna sucker.
Wouldn't fetish be more appropriate, considering how he gets off on eating creampies? Well-written but not erotic. The money for that truck would have been better spent paying off part of the mortgage on their house. Maybe hubby should get some strange and then let her taste it on his cock, or smell the perfume (of another) on his collar, or maybe kiss her and let her taste another woman's pussy on his lips. Do you suppose his wife would turn the other cheek to something like that?
If the topic offends you. It's a story. I will never understand why anyone reads a story on a topic they don't like. I don't read any of the Gay or BDSM stuff simply because it's not for me. Keep writing. I enjoyed it
A popular local song goes "IF when you come home, the fridge is full of food, all the bills have been paid, and your wife is happy, then why bother the other man?" Forward thinking and I notice a lot of your stores before were of revenge now they have turned and are "if I am befitting from my wife's indiscretions then why stop a good thing?"
I wonder if the guy could see around the new truck and understand that his cheating slut wife was exposing him to every disease known to man? Is the truck and having a slut for a wife worth risking your life? I think not. And how stupid does she think he is? She assumes he doesn't know he's eating other men's leavings? She doesn't think he knows that her tips wouldn't even make the down payment on the truck? I don't know what bothers me more - the fact that she's cheating on him or the fact that she thinks he's a dumbass. Another JPB disaster.
English
THANKS B"BEE...
...for regurgitating this piece of trash almost as if you'd read the last few reviews....
Oh well
Bob knows how to write some gross weird stories. Sometimes they are a little over the top like this one, but I'll have to hand it to him, the dude sure writes a lot of stories.
Thanks Bob. Not quite my cup of tea, but I appreciate the effort.
Were Did they Go?
Your testes Bob just when was it that you lost them?
More please
I really liked the story, very erotic. Eating a cream pie is a common theme and in fiction it's fine.
One of your best
Loved it hubbie gets the best of two worlds.
Get back to revenge.............
I like your retribution stories better than the willing cuck stories. This tale, while well written, definitely did not float my boat. It sank like a stone.
not to forget the money she gets from whoring
the husband has turned into a pimp, living off the whoring wife. no AIDS/STD in paradise
Good sex every night . . .
. . . a nice new truck, and the bills are getting paid. No wonder he has a grin on his face even though it's there permanently with a little crust. Okay, it isn't Hemingway, certainly not Shakespeare although the bard was a lusty rapper at times, it must be the leader of the church of the subgenius; Praise Bob!!!
It was a short fun story and that's okay.
nice if your are into that sort of thing but sadly i'm not.
the old English meaning for a clock-old.
a man who can not satify his lady sexually.
who then get tared and fathered in chicken feathers, if he complains, that she has sex with another man.
old saxon.
so the real defination of a clokold is some one that complains about there woman cheating on them, as they clearly can not satisfy her.
even so this story to me was not my cup of tea. as such 1 star.
reasons..
i dislike the modern meaning of a cluck-old, in story's.
i prefer male domination.
or
Delmer that leaves you hanging on the edge to see which path they take.
he did not cop out or wimped out he was clearly into shearing his wife. to me that odd. unless it an open relationship.
fine, to me that just pointless. open mirages from the get go fine. anythign else other than an open honest relation ship is.. mis trust. to me that why i find these cluck story's to be... lame. she dont trust him or respect him she may love him, but to me there can not be a relationship without respect, trust, openness & love. 1 out of 4 = a failed relationship..
she make him eat out her marks cum. no respect.
she did not tell him about the side job. no trust, or openness
the cash in the account is not an issue. it's common to have separate accosts for your own personal spending.
a one way relation ship to me, is to me, not what i call a fair deal. as such she was trash. she hookered for a car for him. a car they clearly did not need. and so there was no point to it??? so she had to have an other reason thrill and excitement.. so she hookered because she could, and felt the thrill was worth it. the car was a bribe. more a guilty here a one off prezcent for all the crempies.
to me it was test. do you wish to be kept man or are you into a fair relation ship. if yoru into fair relation ship's then yoru lookignto what i did ot get that car and act on it. if not your just my pet toy..
persoanly i cant see why or nay motive on her part for doign hwat she did to him and still marrying him other then beigna sucker.
Wrong category?
Wouldn't fetish be more appropriate, considering how he gets off on eating creampies? Well-written but not erotic. The money for that truck would have been better spent paying off part of the mortgage on their house. Maybe hubby should get some strange and then let her taste it on his cock, or smell the perfume (of another) on his collar, or maybe kiss her and let her taste another woman's pussy on his lips. Do you suppose his wife would turn the other cheek to something like that?
Why read it?
If the topic offends you. It's a story. I will never understand why anyone reads a story on a topic they don't like. I don't read any of the Gay or BDSM stuff simply because it's not for me. Keep writing. I enjoyed it
We have a saying..
A popular local song goes "IF when you come home, the fridge is full of food, all the bills have been paid, and your wife is happy, then why bother the other man?" Forward thinking and I notice a lot of your stores before were of revenge now they have turned and are "if I am befitting from my wife's indiscretions then why stop a good thing?"
Good story about Velma
It would be nice if you could give Velma's side of the picture. How she felt when the extras started. Keep up the good work.
Despite the warning I read this crazy story.
I wonder if the guy could see around the new truck and understand that his cheating slut wife was exposing him to every disease known to man? Is the truck and having a slut for a wife worth risking your life? I think not. And how stupid does she think he is? She assumes he doesn't know he's eating other men's leavings? She doesn't think he knows that her tips wouldn't even make the down payment on the truck? I don't know what bothers me more - the fact that she's cheating on him or the fact that she thinks he's a dumbass. Another JPB disaster.
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