All Comments on 'Never Again Ch. 01'

by bellerebelle

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Loved it, please keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Same as above, great story, keep going!

Same as above, great story, keep going!

Sox_lover05Sox_lover05almost 13 years ago
Good job!

Good story. A few mistakes, but keep it coming.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
yep

Definitely want more.

mtoldman33mtoldman33almost 13 years ago
Enjoyed this

Looking for more

foxy_lady76foxy_lady76almost 13 years ago

you have a great story here... nice beginning. keep writing, just check for grammar errors. i will be looking for the next chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Love it!

Cant wait for more!!

LoneStarRiderLoneStarRideralmost 13 years ago
Oh, yeah.....

Scott is an idiot. Not for losing the moment of passion, but for his absolute failure to recognize that he wants/needs Gia in his life.

Excellent writing. Looking forward to ch.02.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Wonderful...

Looking forward to more!!

Elle xx

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Looovvveee it

V3

luv_romanceluv_romancealmost 13 years ago
Continue

I find this story endearing. Continue pls :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

I wondering if your gonna skip to the future or what.... please update soon!

bellerebellebellerebellealmost 13 years agoAuthor
From the author

Hi! Thank you all soooo much for reading, voting and commenting! I really appreciate it! I just submitted chapter 2, so it should be posted in the next few days. I'm enjoying writing and will keep going as long as you're interested in reading. Thank you!

~Belle~

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
wow..

this is really some great writing for your first romance story.

I'm hooked.

*****

BoringOldGuyBoringOldGuyalmost 13 years ago
Great story - please continue!

This was very well done. The descriptions, character definitions, tension and conflicts (internal & external) make for a terrific read. Please provide the additional chapter(s) quickly as you have me hooked.

TheOldRomanticTheOldRomanticover 6 years ago
Good chapter!

A good chapter for what seems like a great story.

Although I am a man, I recognize that we are usually quite thick in our relationships with women. Never forget that, normally, women are much more mature than men at the same age.

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.

Tonyusmc3051Tonyusmc3051almost 2 years ago

DON'T WASTE YOUR TIME, AFTER 11 YEARS THEY HAVE NEVER FINISHED THIS STORY. IT SHOULD BE REMOVED!!!!!!!!

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