by bellerebelle
Same as above, great story, keep going!
you have a great story here... nice beginning. keep writing, just check for grammar errors. i will be looking for the next chapters.
Scott is an idiot. Not for losing the moment of passion, but for his absolute failure to recognize that he wants/needs Gia in his life.
Excellent writing. Looking forward to ch.02.
I wondering if your gonna skip to the future or what.... please update soon!
Hi! Thank you all soooo much for reading, voting and commenting! I really appreciate it! I just submitted chapter 2, so it should be posted in the next few days. I'm enjoying writing and will keep going as long as you're interested in reading. Thank you!
~Belle~
this is really some great writing for your first romance story.
I'm hooked.
*****
This was very well done. The descriptions, character definitions, tension and conflicts (internal & external) make for a terrific read. Please provide the additional chapter(s) quickly as you have me hooked.
A good chapter for what seems like a great story.
Although I am a man, I recognize that we are usually quite thick in our relationships with women. Never forget that, normally, women are much more mature than men at the same age.
5 * for you.
I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.
DON'T WASTE YOUR TIME, AFTER 11 YEARS THEY HAVE NEVER FINISHED THIS STORY. IT SHOULD BE REMOVED!!!!!!!!