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Never Again Ch. 01

bybellerebelle©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/05/11

Loved it, please keep writing.

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by Anonymous06/05/11

Same as above, great story, keep going!

Same as above, great story, keep going!

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by Sox_lover0506/05/11

Good job!

Good story. A few mistakes, but keep it coming.

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by Anonymous06/05/11

yep

Definitely want more.

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by mtoldman3306/05/11

Enjoyed this

Looking for more

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by foxy_lady7606/05/11

you have a great story here... nice beginning. keep writing, just check for grammar errors. i will be looking for the next chapters.

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by Anonymous06/05/11

Love it!

Cant wait for more!!

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by LoneStarRider06/05/11

Oh, yeah.....

Scott is an idiot. Not for losing the moment of passion, but for his absolute failure to recognize that he wants/needs Gia in his life.
Excellent writing. Looking forward to ch.02.

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by Anonymous06/05/11

Wonderful...

Looking forward to more!!

Elle xx

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by Anonymous06/05/11

Looovvveee it

V3

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by luv_romance06/06/11

Continue

I find this story endearing. Continue pls :)

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by Anonymous06/07/11

I wondering if your gonna skip to the future or what.... please update soon!

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by bellerebelle06/08/11

From the author

Hi! Thank you all soooo much for reading, voting and commenting! I really appreciate it! I just submitted chapter 2, so it should be posted in the next few days. I'm enjoying writing and will keep going as long as you're interested in reading. Thank you!
~Belle~

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by Anonymous06/16/11

wow..

this is really some great writing for your first romance story.
I'm hooked.
*****

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by BoringOldGuy06/17/11

Great story - please continue!

This was very well done. The descriptions, character definitions, tension and conflicts (internal & external) make for a terrific read. Please provide the additional chapter(s) quickly as you have me hooked.

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