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Loved it, please keep writing.
Same as above, great story, keep going!
Same as above, great story, keep going!
Good job!
Good story. A few mistakes, but keep it coming.
yep
Definitely want more.
Enjoyed this
Looking for more
you have a great story here... nice beginning. keep writing, just check for grammar errors. i will be looking for the next chapters.
Love it!
Cant wait for more!!
Oh, yeah.....
Scott is an idiot. Not for losing the moment of passion, but for his absolute failure to recognize that he wants/needs Gia in his life.
Excellent writing. Looking forward to ch.02.
Wonderful...
Looking forward to more!!
Elle xx
Looovvveee it
V3
Continue
I find this story endearing. Continue pls :)
I wondering if your gonna skip to the future or what.... please update soon!
From the author
Hi! Thank you all soooo much for reading, voting and commenting! I really appreciate it! I just submitted chapter 2, so it should be posted in the next few days. I'm enjoying writing and will keep going as long as you're interested in reading. Thank you!
~Belle~
wow..
this is really some great writing for your first romance story.
I'm hooked.
*****
Great story - please continue!
This was very well done. The descriptions, character definitions, tension and conflicts (internal & external) make for a terrific read. Please provide the additional chapter(s) quickly as you have me hooked.
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