Outstanding writing. But.....it's getting to be time to start revealing at least some part of Bree's history, which has her (by her own admission) so messed up.
I've loved this story from the start. Your writing has always been good and is improving and this was just brilliant. Just a wonderful read! Absolutely a favorite!
two people, one damaged in a way, another with the brains to know when to move and when to coast , and what ever it is her past, i think that while he wil;l be the catalyst for its diminishment. it is going to be a rough ride and summer and tammy are going to be required
This story is simply amazing. Love how Ty is around Bree. He knows she has been through something that has made her wary of men, and he doesn't push her past her comfort zone. That last scene of him comforting her while she cried ws touching and I look foward to more of this couple.
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Anonymous07/01/11
Just started huh?
You sure you haven't written anything before. Keep it coming. It's great.
English
So sweet!
You are a really wonderful writer! I look forward to reading more of your stories!
awesome.
Outstanding writing. But.....it's getting to be time to start revealing at least some part of Bree's history, which has her (by her own admission) so messed up.
Developing Well
A really well developing story. It isn't hard to guess what may have happened in Brees past, but she is developing trust well. Keep it up
This is so good
I'm thinking I want the "revelation" to be several chapters on just so I can selfishly enjoy the story longer.
Well done.
seriously enjoying your story style and pace of events. keep it up!!! look forward to each contribution.
I've loved this story from the start. Your writing has always been good and is improving and this was just brilliant. Just a wonderful read! Absolutely a favorite!
Groovey
Excellent. I liked the other chapters but this one really hit the spot.
a love story
two people, one damaged in a way, another with the brains to know when to move and when to coast , and what ever it is her past, i think that while he wil;l be the catalyst for its diminishment. it is going to be a rough ride and summer and tammy are going to be required
great!!!
By far the best chapter!!
This story is simply amazing. Love how Ty is around Bree. He knows she has been through something that has made her wary of men, and he doesn't push her past her comfort zone. That last scene of him comforting her while she cried ws touching and I look foward to more of this couple.
Just started huh?
You sure you haven't written anything before. Keep it coming. It's great.
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