by rpsuch
i keep reading comments comparing this version to the original, and how ashley has changed more/less, etc. it would be great if the original version could be reposted in all of its unedited glory. how about it?
either way, i think this story is very close to "summer camp', even though it is not as involved, nor as loaded with sexual content (which also works).
Its been about 2 months now since this one was posted. This is the best story on the site. Please keep it going! ...To end it here would be such a shame!