Sweetness Ch. 02

I think so far the story is starting to pick up and I just wished there was a little more. It's so funny when I like something I'm always screaming for more and for it to be longer. I can't wait til' she actually catches up with Kai and the mystery black female...lmao

Much better and the story is picking up...

My interest is piqued more and more with this story, this chapter cleared up the confusion from the first chapter, now I don't have that "missing" feeling when reading it. So keep up the good work and can't wait till you update. Though I' am wondering if Kai is a bit unstable sometimes while reading his antics...lol

hmmm...

So Kai is the cosmic glue that keeps the people light hearted. So I'm guessing you are trying to write this story to become some sort of love triangle. Good start try to write longer chapters and please update Parasol.


*****

i like

please keep going. i'm really interested in kai. he seems like quite the character.

Ok so far I am loving this story. I can't wait to read more please update soon.

I like it =)

I'm liking the direction of the story but I agree it's much too short to really get a read of the characters or the story in general. But, I'm sure whats coming is going to be just as good and on a really positive note it's very well written =) Can't wait to read what you come up with next =)

CUTE

MORE IN DEPTH ON THE CHARACTERS THEN THE MEETING...

Oliver Twist

Please, sir(ma'am),I want some more...lol this story is insanely good and hella funny, looking forward to many more updates and just so you know I aint too proud to beg.

Love it

And waiting for more....................

Agree

w/anon "I like it =)" this is an interesting story so far, but I need a lot more to really get invested in the story.

keep going!

i've been waiting so long for another story please don't tell me you've stopped writing this one before it even got started, i love the stroy line it's so good! can't wait for the next one please keep going

i love it

you need to really finish this story it is really GOOD

Michael, said.."No dear I'm gay". I love it!

Please finish this story it is good so far!

Please continue

This is very good and engaging. My attention was obviously captured with part one.