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by Anonymous

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by twelveoone06/02/11

A5

eh?
despite the alliteration, I don't see much. (not a haiku) even seems like why bother. I have no idea why I gave you a five. Intimidation? I doubt it. It amuses, that's the ticket!

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by zack_constantine06/04/11

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An odd poem from you. Outwardly as incompetent and sexually deflating as most "erotic" poems at Literotica, except for that title, which hints at irony.

I'd be curious as to what your intent was.

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