Red Sky

atypical... huh, kaishaku with a seven minute wake-up call

while horrorifying, this is an entertaining and educational anecdote. Many blessed communicative women need be aware some men maintain there very own counsel when in shock. Having been in a war area with fellow soldiers (some experiencing shock) you need recognize when they are hearing and not listening. Men are much more an open book than women, however they are less prepared for twists and turns of behavior.

Nice little cautionary tale....

....it read well, not so good audio-wise.

Wasnt' that a twist?

Quite a thought provoking ending. The guy's a psychopath - and for all his planning to catch her in flagrante delicto he doesn't seem to be concerned with the inevitable consequences of what he has just done.

The sex is well enough written, although the husband's detachment seems strange until we read the ending and see that he has gone off the edge.

Perhaps a little foreshadowing of his psychiatric state would be appropriate. The genre demands that guys be curious about their wives screwing other men - although this guy is one of the few, if not only, husbands who wanted to compare the wife's reaction to the lover(s)' attentions to his own

Good story - I gave it a 5 mostly based on what was different about it

Good ending. He really did "TORCH THE BITCH" Good beginning, shit middle and GREAT ending. kudos writer.

I was ready to give 1 star until the last sentence

5 stars. Better in real life to just walk away. Less jail time to worry about.

Hard to decide

I liked the ending. Very very much.

I missed the pleasure of hearing not about her lies, but the direct consequences of her lies.

So while I appreciate the ending, I think the journey to it is to subtle and looses much of the enjoyment the reader could have shared with the man.

Oh yeah, I like the literal torch the bitch. Pity a couple of cucks couldn't have joined her.

Bravo

I had a feeling this couldn't be some romantic jive cuckold story. Great ending.

I guess this is

literally "Torch the Bitch."

Perfect ending!

F*ck the slut, burn the bitch! I love it!

Haa haa

Hope he was driving to the health clinic! Too bad he didn't check their id, matches generally come in multiples.

I think it's better served cold.

Once the writer let the cuckolds leave he should have let some time go by before he torched the bitch,love means getting away with it.

Grea ending

Great ending! Let the slut burn...

Laughable!

Oh honey! You've caught me in the act fucking not one, but two men, but that proves it was just sex and shows that I still love you with all my heart. Now since you got all hard seeing that let's just get you naked and I'll show you the diffence between love and sex. Now isn't that all better? What a great marriage we have!

This guy's a borderline homo and/or the most clueless bastard on Earth. Sucks to be you pal, either way.

That's love?

Not enough action. Nor clarification of how or what he'd planned (the whole flights/taxi thing.) The concept is silly ... being with 2 men proves it doesn't mean anything.

Perfect ending

Some of the commenters must not have caught the last sentence. The wife was sleeping and the husband was driving away while their house was on fire. That is a way to get even. He was no wimp, just wanted to get a last piece before the lying cheating cunt got what she deserved. Great ending! Had me pissed off until the end. Then it made me like it. Very good