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Locked in with a Succubus Ch. 08

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by Anonymous06/05/11

Cliff-hangers are the only real downside...

This is a very enjoyable story, has been from the beginning and it's only gotten more so. Only problem with it are the cliff-hangers. When it's finished I'd wager this'll be a real page-turner. Have to wonder about the latest one; For Nicole to have her eyes widen and mutter 'oh crap,' is this a good thing or bad thing for our male protagonist? Is there something about him she doesn't know? Was our succubus only trying to do everything but such out his soul - only to unintentionally start the process despite that? Or is she just surprised by how tasty his virgin soul is? Really looking forward to what comes next.

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by killerdragon024906/05/11

can't wait

his story is go when will the next chapter come? but i bet his not human at all. i wont know until the next chapter but it would be funny if that happen.

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by u596906/05/11

delicious!

Not your usual fare. This is becoming most
interesting and unusual. Much fun!
Very nice ending. "Oh crap..."
Wicked, wicked and more wicked!

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by stories4eva06/05/11

Who's the succubus?

I've recently discovered this site and am DELIGHTED to read your stories! I am sat here in front of my computer unable to stop reading! I started with this series (absolutely brilliant) but have moved on to some of your other stuff. The way you use description is bang on. I'm sucked in.

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