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great;)
Thanks four your story.
I like the way you put a lot of direct speech into it. This makes it seem more alive;) looking forward for more...
Stupid
That was probably the worst story ive read to date. Needs work on the dialoge between the characters. It sounded much too rushed.
HOT
Wonderful story not disgusting but dirty enough for me and to the person who said it was stupid they are stupid this story is HOT!
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