The Waiting

This was great, how about a second part? maybe some time in the future?

How...pathetic...and hypocritical

You can't "make" someone love you. They either choose to or they choose not to and if they are forced...it is meaningless, it isn't love, it's control

and his arguements of ethics? This from the guy who's brainwashing someone? Puh-lease! The only person he loves is himself...maybe he should use the nanites on himself to alter his apperance, his mannerisms and his thougts, then tell us how "ethical" he really is.

IF she is unable to say no to him, then she is a slave with no free will.

Of course you can't "make" someone love you. I think that's the whole point of the story. The story is about obsession, not love. He just thinks that it's love. Just because a character in a story has a certain point of view that doesn't mean the author is advocating for that point of view. The author is just presenting something that they hope the reader will find interesting. Which I did.