Very much meets your usual high standards. Your creativity never ceases to astound me, your delivery awe inspiring. I'll keep reading and enjoying your stories 'til my eyeballs fall out of my head.
Feel free to keep writing and I'll keep rating five stars! Thank's for all your hard work.
This story is off to a promising start. The sex scenes begin with lots of details but somehow don't quite finish as strongly as they could. But overall a great beginning, can't wait to read more.
Really hot storyline, and nicely written along with a good edit, makes the story a pleasure to read.
I don't imagine he will be in any hurry to leave his mother's home and go back to his work, unless the two women wear him out so much from fucking him, he will have to leave for his own well being.
I can only guess, once he gets the two of them to fuck him,they will be on him constantly.
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EXCELLENT !
NOT SURPRISING AT AL! ANOTHER REALLY GOOD STORY, BY THIS AUTHOR..MORE PLEASE
He does it again
The start of another hot story by Many Feathers.
Eagerly anticipating more!
Very much meets your usual high standards. Your creativity never ceases to astound me, your delivery awe inspiring. I'll keep reading and enjoying your stories 'til my eyeballs fall out of my head.
Feel free to keep writing and I'll keep rating five stars! Thank's for all your hard work.
Max52
Well done!
Excellent start and hot premise. Looking forward to reading more.
MORE!!!!!
pl dont make us wait "a million years" for the cunt-in-u-ation.
Great start
This story is off to a promising start. The sex scenes begin with lots of details but somehow don't quite finish as strongly as they could. But overall a great beginning, can't wait to read more.
good story...
Good story...looking forward to the rest.
A very good start
Really hot storyline, and nicely written along with a good edit, makes the story a pleasure to read.
I don't imagine he will be in any hurry to leave his mother's home and go back to his work, unless the two women wear him out so much from fucking him, he will have to leave for his own well being.
I can only guess, once he gets the two of them to fuck him,they will be on him constantly.
Thanks for the good read.
great blowjob
I hope you continue your writting. You can make a good story because this first chapter was a very good apetizer.
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