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by twelveoone06/03/11

Noble Gases

are also Inert. Doesn't work for me. A5 regardless. Erring on the side of caution.

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by butters06/05/11

well it does for me :)

clever, elegant write, drawing some lovely lines, creating a subtle tension. recommended.

twelve, for me it's all about the quality of stillness when the rest of the world is frantically buzzing all around. perhaps i'm wrong, but that's what it makes me feel.

p.s gases

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