All Comments on 'Coffee Break'

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annanovaannanovaalmost 13 years ago
Now that's a coffee break!

As someone who has long enjoyed the appeal of a good thunderstorm, I applaud the way you play with the natural eroticism of the storm in combination with your character's pre-occupation with her work. The sense of "is he, or isn't he there," was great.

CalvinHolmesCalvinHolmesalmost 13 years ago
Nicely done

Liked this one a lot--short, sweet and to the point! The thunderstorm was a nice touch, and the title of the novel was certainly appropriate. Well done!

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