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Church Basement

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by Anonymous

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by simply__me06/05/11

worth reading

sweet memory and simple

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by WillowedCabin06/05/11

I think it's just me...

I read this and reread this and still feel like I missed the boat. I understand that the simplicity of it reflects the tender nature of the subject, but I wish this didn't fit so nicely in the box.

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by twelveoone06/06/11

I recommended

although my feeling is somewhere between the two comments below. A5

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by UnderYourSpell06/07/11

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This came over as prose with line breaks

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by Corpse_rider06/11/11

No, this is good.

The poem begins as prose then as it progresses becomes poetry, reflecting the progress of the narrator's affair with the tutor.
Very clever.

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