All Comments on 'Chapter 02: The Awakening'

Hey, keep it up. Don't let negative comments get you down. The second chapter, short like the first, really started to add to and fill out the story. Looking forward to learning where you take her on this sub-journey. And your picture is very fetching.

Ignore the oafs and keep writing. I'm enjoying the build-up

Please keep your adventure going. Is this a true story, I'm sure you will recall more as you put pen to paper.

Like your picture hope to read more soon

Your stories could be really good if they were just several chapters longer. Damn, these are way too short unless you intended to extend subsequent chapters into something much longer.