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by Anonymous

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by twelveoone06/09/11

A5

I wonder about the double meaning of the title. I enjoyed this.

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by simply__me06/09/11

I had

to look up most of the terminology to understand. Yes, a hopeless newbie. After understanding what the terms meant, the aha moment arrived (albeit slooooowly), and I thought this good. This is the first illustrated I see. I kinda like that, too. The picture fits what you have done, and you put the words as the focal point with the picture blurred. The words should be what is important, with the picture only an enhancement. I thought that good, too.

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by tazz31701/17/12

YET DEBTS MUST BE PAID

in coin of the realm. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Anonymous05/02/12

Nice work!

Would like to see the poem without the picture though. It was a distracting background, however I still gave this poem 5 stars!

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