All Comments on 'Two Worlds Ch. 04'

We already have one new love mate now what about Mr. Cranky Pants?

please comment! i would like to know what people think of my work! do you like the way the story is going? do you like the characters? any constructive comments are welcomed!

i love your work! its so unique! i would be sooooooo disapointed if you stopped writting we love you Vixen!

I know you mentioned or noted at the beginning this was from Charles point of view but I found that after a few chapters I started getting lost in who was being the ass. Even if I specify that a section is from someone's point of view I still add their names fairly frequently for just that reason.