...but thanking your editor up front really draws attention to the dozens of grievous errors.
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Anonymous06/10/11
very good
I agree with the ananymous with the comment abou thanking your editor out front. Id use word then copy and paste cause then you would know there will be few, if any, mistakes. But i also cant wait for part 3. So have a good day people!
The reason is; it was about him loving his mother more that making her a submissive to her slut friend.
I liked the part of when he seduced his mother and made her his slut, and treated her with more love.
It's still a good chapter though, it's just the first one suited me better.
Thanks for the post.
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Anonymous06/11/11
Good threesome
The story was good but a little too much bondage for me. I did enjoy the parts about the stockings and pantyhose though. More of those would greatly enhance part 3
i love this story. another great job silkstockings my sexy slut school teacher.
i love the part when her son made her lick his cock clean after fucking her best friends ass right in front of her. the naughty thoughts of how wrong it must be to clean his cock after her fucked her friends ass hole with his cock.
her having to open her slut mommy's mouth and take the dirty cock in her slut mouth. suck all the ass juices off his dirty cock. then lick the base of the cock to get it good and clean.
then to make it even nastier. he ordered her to go suck the cum from her new mistress ass.
i imagine her face going to the fucked asshole. cum begining to leak out and down her asshole to her hot slutty pussy. her lips kissing the cum. her tongue lapping it up as it oozes out her fucked ass.
how naughty and dirty and so taboo.
i loved it.
again thanks silkstockings for another wonderful story.
your greatest fan the blue eyed black man.
Very nice, for this kind of story. The real test-- do the characters do things I would never do in real life-- and does it make me cum anyway? Since it's relevant here, I have to say I did, and loads of it. We all want a sequel, so take care. Find another erotic angle-- surprise us. Thanks for these two stories.
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Anonymous07/25/11
Very hot!
Nicely done. Can't wait for the third installment and the introduction of the sister into the mix!
I think you would have done better had you re-read chapter one before writing this chapter. Remember? They had already discussed getting Hannah to join them. So, why was he so nonplussed by the neighbor's being there the next morning, or that she knew about him and his mother?
The first 2 chapters were very hot and sexy. Please give us more on Jeremy, his mom Elaine, Hannah and his sister.
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Anonymous11/18/11
Sorry didn't enjoy it
I'm sorry to say I thought the first chapter was good leading up to the climax of him winning his mother but all this Domination game and the mother crying all the time sounded more of a black-mailing than fun buts that's my opinion
I agree with bigdadddyrich, the first chapter was much better. You had the beginnings of a loving son and mother building a great master slave relationship. However, you turned it into a son who now just thinks of his mother as another whore to treat like shit.
He even gave her away to Hannah. Bad mistake. I hope he is not too disappointed when he finds out that Hannah has her fucking the whole neighborhood and he is getting sloppy twenty-thirds. Further, if he had really instilled in her that he was her master, she would never have agreed to do what Hannah asked with him expressly telling her too.
If you do another chapter, I hope you will make it right.
I put the pictures on the table and then sipped on my wine. I then said, "I see that one of the pictures has you with a woman. Have you ever been with a woman?"
"Yes," she responded. I looked at her for a more detailed explanation and she added, "College was a crazy time."
Mom said in chapter one she had been with a woman. In chapter she told Hannah she hadden. At the end of chapter one she was willing to be with Hannah while her son watched. After mom telling Hannah what she and her son had did opened mom to willling do has her son has asked her to do with Hannah. but then went the oppisite way
no in chapter 1 it says shes been with a woman in this chapter it says shes never licked pussy... doesnt mean shes never been with a woman.
good story well written
Yes, we need a continuation of this with mommy, friend and now sister, but less domination and more love and keep the facts straight. Should have had Hannah clean up the Mommy too after the first fuck. Even the stakes a little with the son in control.
Good story as all your stories. It's fun to see a male as your main character for once. It would be great to have another chapter to finish where the sister joins the group.
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Anonymous01/28/13
We Need More
We need to find out what happens with Sis!
And I agree with several others, Part 1 was better than Part 2
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Anonymous03/01/13
small gripe
I just have one nagging thing to comment on. The use of sneaked is just grating on my ears, and i think the better past tense to use would be snuck.
otherwise i enjoyed the story and look forward to seeing the conquest of sis.
That is saying a lot, in my opinion. I do agree with some others though. I think chapter 1 was better than chapter 2. I would have rather not had Hannah become his mother's mistress, but I also like to see how your stories progress. I really like how you weave your plots and characters. Hope that this series catches your imagination again soon. Thank you again!
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Anonymous03/22/13
loved it, another great story by u
jeremy fucking his mother, and mothers best friend joined, didnt mind that she was a mistress, cant wait to read the next chapter, how the sister will submit to her brother and mother, brother always remaining the master in the household for all 3 women.
please write the next chapter very soon. :)
was a good story till you started sharing mom show mom some respect and not share her with everybody certainly not her best friend forever thats just wrong write another part to make up for this and at least make sis the one you use for everyone elses enjoyment instead of mom moms are to precious to do that too redeem your self
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Anonymous05/10/14
Another story ruined
You have a couple of stories that start out great, then you start sharing without any shred of respect for the character or completely disregard how the story is moving. You change directions and ruin what has been established.
The mother character is a sub she gets off on being used so her being shared at her masters request is a turn on for her I don't understnd all the complaints I loved this storie and would be very happy to see more
started out great with mom being dominated by son but when you had moms best friend treat her like a piece of shit and son doing the same thing ruined it for me started great ended horribly very disappointing write another chapter and redeem yourself please
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Anonymous07/30/14
write more.
Their right that was fucked up what you are doing to your mom. You started out lovibf your mom. And then you degrade put out her and disrespect her by treating her like trash. Also letting her best friend do the same. You need to fix it. Show your mom the respect and love she deserves. You started out caring and loving her and would do anything for her to a mean unfealing creap. Put it back to were he loves and cares about his mom. And help her with her disires as a sub in a fun and respectful and loving way.
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Anonymous09/16/14
we need more
why is it with all of the greatest stories we are always left hanging for monts on the next chapters
like slut mommie and now this one
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Anonymous11/09/14
I cant wait for chapter 3
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Anonymous01/04/15
cant wait for more
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Anonymous10/06/15
Time for a switch.
Getting tired of strong women getting taken advantage of. Mom needs to take her life back at least from her " friend ". Turn the table.
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Anonymous12/09/15
Crap
The author finally managed to show what a real piece of crap the son really was. He didn't deserve having any of the women in the story having anything to do with him. What a dirt bag he turned out to be. I quit reading in chapter 1 of Making Mommy Mine
So disappointed...What where you thinking????? From a 5 star chapter 1 story to this shit. No wonder you didn't write a chapter 3 too many negative comments.Finally get another Editor .
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Anonymous02/29/16
Hannah didn't take much cock, so her pussy was nice and tight!
Hannah still liked a good fuck once in a while though, and I was always happy to help out. She came over when mom was gone wearing a halter top, and jean shorts, proudly showing her sexy body to me. Her pussy is kind of hard to get into at first, other than a dildo, it didn't get used much. Once I get inside her though, she stretches out to take all my size. Since she doesn't get much cock, I give it to her hard. My mom always knows when we've fucked, Hannah is always a little gimpy afterwards.
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Anonymous07/07/16
Inconsitencies...
I really love your stories, but the inconsistencies in these two chapters really bugger me. At the end of Ch. 01 the mom accepted her son as master, promised to "dyke out" with her neighbour and told him that she'd invite Hannah over the next morning. In Ch. 02 the son doesn't know any of this. Bit of a damper for an otherwise brilliant story.
English
wow
A damn hot threesome.
Looking forward to part 3.
making of Part three
Wow loved it and I can not wait for part 3 yum
Very hot story...
...but thanking your editor up front really draws attention to the dozens of grievous errors.
very good
I agree with the ananymous with the comment abou thanking your editor out front. Id use word then copy and paste cause then you would know there will be few, if any, mistakes. But i also cant wait for part 3. So have a good day people!
I think I liked the first chapter better
The reason is; it was about him loving his mother more that making her a submissive to her slut friend.
I liked the part of when he seduced his mother and made her his slut, and treated her with more love.
It's still a good chapter though, it's just the first one suited me better.
Thanks for the post.
Good threesome
The story was good but a little too much bondage for me. I did enjoy the parts about the stockings and pantyhose though. More of those would greatly enhance part 3
Fucking hot
There are no "grievous errors" in this story unless one is pedantic and anal.
For the rest, it's another fucking awesome story.
great threesome
I loved the story, Jeremy is very lucky.
Now, his luck should extend to his sister as well & maybe he can impregnate all three of his women
nice very hot and super erotic
i love this story. another great job silkstockings my sexy slut school teacher.
i love the part when her son made her lick his cock clean after fucking her best friends ass right in front of her. the naughty thoughts of how wrong it must be to clean his cock after her fucked her friends ass hole with his cock.
her having to open her slut mommy's mouth and take the dirty cock in her slut mouth. suck all the ass juices off his dirty cock. then lick the base of the cock to get it good and clean.
then to make it even nastier. he ordered her to go suck the cum from her new mistress ass.
i imagine her face going to the fucked asshole. cum begining to leak out and down her asshole to her hot slutty pussy. her lips kissing the cum. her tongue lapping it up as it oozes out her fucked ass.
how naughty and dirty and so taboo.
i loved it.
again thanks silkstockings for another wonderful story.
your greatest fan the blue eyed black man.
I think I love you.
Your are so f****** good. God I swear we are soul mates when it comes to mothers.
our favorite mommy
Very nice, for this kind of story. The real test-- do the characters do things I would never do in real life-- and does it make me cum anyway? Since it's relevant here, I have to say I did, and loads of it. We all want a sequel, so take care. Find another erotic angle-- surprise us. Thanks for these two stories.
Very hot!
Nicely done. Can't wait for the third installment and the introduction of the sister into the mix!
HOT HOT HOT
please give us some more with jeramys sister in the mix. god ilove hot incest sex. thank you so much.
Best story of the month to me.
I don't think I have had a boner this raging due to a story yet.
I loved every act,detail,intimaticy,and mostly the mom begging for her son to fuck her and willingly would do anything just have her son ram her.
5/5 My friend, you earned it.
whats next
when is the next story cumming out
Continuity maybe?
I think you would have done better had you re-read chapter one before writing this chapter. Remember? They had already discussed getting Hannah to join them. So, why was he so nonplussed by the neighbor's being there the next morning, or that she knew about him and his mother?
Next Chapter Please
The first 2 chapters were very hot and sexy. Please give us more on Jeremy, his mom Elaine, Hannah and his sister.
Sorry didn't enjoy it
I'm sorry to say I thought the first chapter was good leading up to the climax of him winning his mother but all this Domination game and the mother crying all the time sounded more of a black-mailing than fun buts that's my opinion
Too Bad
I agree with bigdadddyrich, the first chapter was much better. You had the beginnings of a loving son and mother building a great master slave relationship. However, you turned it into a son who now just thinks of his mother as another whore to treat like shit.
He even gave her away to Hannah. Bad mistake. I hope he is not too disappointed when he finds out that Hannah has her fucking the whole neighborhood and he is getting sloppy twenty-thirds. Further, if he had really instilled in her that he was her master, she would never have agreed to do what Hannah asked with him expressly telling her too.
If you do another chapter, I hope you will make it right.
Too Bad - Correction
Sorry, the last line of the second paragraph should have read:
"without him expressly telling her to"
Didn't go with Chapter one
From chapter one
I put the pictures on the table and then sipped on my wine. I then said, "I see that one of the pictures has you with a woman. Have you ever been with a woman?"
"Yes," she responded. I looked at her for a more detailed explanation and she added, "College was a crazy time."
Mom said in chapter one she had been with a woman. In chapter she told Hannah she hadden. At the end of chapter one she was willing to be with Hannah while her son watched. After mom telling Hannah what she and her son had did opened mom to willling do has her son has asked her to do with Hannah. but then went the oppisite way
no in chapter 1 it says shes been with a woman in this chapter it says shes never licked pussy... doesnt mean shes never been with a woman.
good story well written
more but better
Yes, we need a continuation of this with mommy, friend and now sister, but less domination and more love and keep the facts straight. Should have had Hannah clean up the Mommy too after the first fuck. Even the stakes a little with the son in control.
Good...
It was good, but I think part 1 was much better.
You could develop this situation much more, but anyway I liked.
Did you plan to write another chapter?
Good story as all your stories. It's fun to see a male as your main character for once. It would be great to have another chapter to finish where the sister joins the group.
We Need More
We need to find out what happens with Sis!
And I agree with several others, Part 1 was better than Part 2
small gripe
I just have one nagging thing to comment on. The use of sneaked is just grating on my ears, and i think the better past tense to use would be snuck.
otherwise i enjoyed the story and look forward to seeing the conquest of sis.
One of your best!
That is saying a lot, in my opinion. I do agree with some others though. I think chapter 1 was better than chapter 2. I would have rather not had Hannah become his mother's mistress, but I also like to see how your stories progress. I really like how you weave your plots and characters. Hope that this series catches your imagination again soon. Thank you again!
loved it, another great story by u
jeremy fucking his mother, and mothers best friend joined, didnt mind that she was a mistress, cant wait to read the next chapter, how the sister will submit to her brother and mother, brother always remaining the master in the household for all 3 women.
please write the next chapter very soon. :)
P2 is pure crap, doesn't deserve sequel
Move on and forget this story.
Can't wait for sequel
dissappointing
was a good story till you started sharing mom show mom some respect and not share her with everybody certainly not her best friend forever thats just wrong write another part to make up for this and at least make sis the one you use for everyone elses enjoyment instead of mom moms are to precious to do that too redeem your self
Another story ruined
You have a couple of stories that start out great, then you start sharing without any shred of respect for the character or completely disregard how the story is moving. You change directions and ruin what has been established.
why all the complaining
The mother character is a sub she gets off on being used so her being shared at her masters request is a turn on for her I don't understnd all the complaints I loved this storie and would be very happy to see more
Such a great story
I loved it. thank you again.
not bad
started out great with mom being dominated by son but when you had moms best friend treat her like a piece of shit and son doing the same thing ruined it for me started great ended horribly very disappointing write another chapter and redeem yourself please
write more.
Their right that was fucked up what you are doing to your mom. You started out lovibf your mom. And then you degrade put out her and disrespect her by treating her like trash. Also letting her best friend do the same. You need to fix it. Show your mom the respect and love she deserves. You started out caring and loving her and would do anything for her to a mean unfealing creap. Put it back to were he loves and cares about his mom. And help her with her disires as a sub in a fun and respectful and loving way.
we need more
why is it with all of the greatest stories we are always left hanging for monts on the next chapters
like slut mommie and now this one
I cant wait for chapter 3
cant wait for more
Time for a switch.
Getting tired of strong women getting taken advantage of. Mom needs to take her life back at least from her " friend ". Turn the table.
Crap
The author finally managed to show what a real piece of crap the son really was. He didn't deserve having any of the women in the story having anything to do with him. What a dirt bag he turned out to be. I quit reading in chapter 1 of Making Mommy Mine
Agree with BetterEndings comments
So disappointed...What where you thinking????? From a 5 star chapter 1 story to this shit. No wonder you didn't write a chapter 3 too many negative comments.Finally get another Editor .
Hannah didn't take much cock, so her pussy was nice and tight!
Hannah still liked a good fuck once in a while though, and I was always happy to help out. She came over when mom was gone wearing a halter top, and jean shorts, proudly showing her sexy body to me. Her pussy is kind of hard to get into at first, other than a dildo, it didn't get used much. Once I get inside her though, she stretches out to take all my size. Since she doesn't get much cock, I give it to her hard. My mom always knows when we've fucked, Hannah is always a little gimpy afterwards.
Inconsitencies...
I really love your stories, but the inconsistencies in these two chapters really bugger me. At the end of Ch. 01 the mom accepted her son as master, promised to "dyke out" with her neighbour and told him that she'd invite Hannah over the next morning. In Ch. 02 the son doesn't know any of this. Bit of a damper for an otherwise brilliant story.
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