All Comments on 'Work Mates And Maybe More?'

by Mog80

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kucooziekucooziealmost 13 years ago
Great little encounter

Very vivid and easy to imagine--extremely hot!

VirginiawildVirginiawildalmost 13 years ago

Lovely story. ...Sexy, too. It could use more dialogue.

Mog80Mog80almost 13 years agoAuthor
thanks :-)

Thanks for the feedback. This is my first story, so appreciate all constructive feedback!

lawteyfllawteyflalmost 13 years ago
Nice

Keep it up! You are very good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great story!

Short, but very good story. I especially like how you introduced the characters, and worked them closer together.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Write something else,.please

I loved it. It's the only one you've written though. I want more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Oh, damn, girl! That one of the hottest stories I have ever read on Literotica! I will definitely be having a good time with myself later.

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