This story was pure stroke, with with the author demonstrating no particular effort at creating a plot or back story. The problem I have with pure stroke is that it almost always turns out to be little more than "insert Tab A in Slot 1" and so it was with this story.
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Anonymous06/09/11
Nice
I also enjoy the very things you write about in this story. Well written. Loved it
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Anonymous06/10/11
Mmmmm - yes, very!
My love and I have a date cuming up soon - have to see what we can do about 're-creating' some of the pictures you painted for us...
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Hot!
Well done, descriptions defy imagination.
Romance?
This story was pure stroke, with with the author demonstrating no particular effort at creating a plot or back story. The problem I have with pure stroke is that it almost always turns out to be little more than "insert Tab A in Slot 1" and so it was with this story.
Nice
I also enjoy the very things you write about in this story. Well written. Loved it
Mmmmm - yes, very!
My love and I have a date cuming up soon - have to see what we can do about 're-creating' some of the pictures you painted for us...
Fantastic
What a fantastic read, so real so sensual , oh to meet another woman like her....
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