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This is a great monologue
very enjoyable, high praise for image, humour. What it does not do (for me) is grab me as poetry. It walks me (albeit with great interest) to your conclusion. i.e it is better to get there before I do. If it was bad, I would have got there before you did. (and been bored) Is this making sense? Score 5.
ah shucks
just go bring 'em home. The event can be your next poem! Yeah baby.
Again, a unique sort of flair in your poetry. I'm still wondering why I like it. Maybe because it is so weird. Unconventional.
Course, the slut coming out -- biology patrol part gave me a rise. I mean made me smile.
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Another fun read though not as slick and flowing as Grad school mixer
Good but..
.. a one read. I think someone else mentioned its a fun read but it won't draw you back again to make new discoveries, it doesn't rattle in your head after you've reached the end. However, a really enjoyable read.
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I'll go a bit further and suggest this isn't poetry at all but a fun sort of stream of consciousness write. But I'll give it V because I could be wrong and it is well written.
get out the bible and ankle restraints...
mwahahaha
not all poetry has to be huge and significant and worthy. i couldn't help but enjoy reading this, and i actually think the light delivery glosses over some stuff in there that IS deeper, if not deepy deep. :p
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