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I kinda liked reading this for some odd reason. Maybe the strange cadence or the way you broke up lines.
Same
thing here as the one below.A5. Ok, I get pissy when authours come over and think that an expression of emotion is what poetry is all about. You don't insult my intelligence. This is right there. The problem is you are not leaving much to my imagination. Again, high praise for the writing, it is neither clinical not trite. Senna Jawa said something ( I used to beat the shit out of him for as bring too simplistic), I'll quote him "The difference between poetry and prose is in prose the writer adds 50% and the reader adds 50%. In poetry the writer gives 10% and the reader adds 90%. If that helps, go thank him.
I mentioned you
and grad school mixer, over in New Poems, thread link below.
http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?p=3 7751186#post37751186
make your way over if you see fit.
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Like this one too and the last stanza is a killer! :)
erect member..
..just didn't work for me nor cock, I felt they just didn't go with the spirit of the piece, they jarred for me. There are many amusing euphemisms that could be used for that amusing piece of anatomy that would enhance the tale. Once again, one could nit pick but an amusing read that carries one along.
I likewise
really, enjoyed this. I'm looking forward to more of your stuff.
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