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by UnderYourSpell06/08/11

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I rather like this although I'm none too keen of having every line start with a capital letter, I think it would flow better thus;

Please don't be afraid
of the bumps, bruises,
cuts that adorn my skin.

But having said that, this is miles better than many other poems submitted on the same subject

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