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"samsara begins"
I'm no expert, but I couldn't get through the poem easily because my brain was trying to reconcile what it knew to be samsara with what you have written. Do you mean to say that there was nothingness before this baby? Which would be fine, but I'm not sure that's what you meant. Are you trying to say that the baby is now a part of samsara? The problem with this poem is it has a beginning; this is incongruent with the concept of infinite. Or perhaps you mean that to the perspective in the poem, samsara has been revealed? I'm going to come back later and attempt to wrap my head around this.
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I'm not sure about the concept
of samsara, but looking it up, it is defined as to perpetually flow, if this is the meaning you intend, I have created my own understanding of what you are intending to state, right or wrong. I'm thinking in terms of the flow if life.
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